Reading Reviews for The Perfect Present
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Review #1, by Burning_Bridges The Perfect Present

26th September 2013:
Very cute. I can also see both Harry and Hermione act like this.

I'd be interested to know more about Harry's background given the muggle AU, but that's obviously not in the scope of this story.

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Review #2, by typewriter The Perfect Present

14th July 2013:
I enjoyed this immensely! I particularly liked that there was no resolution, which most authors avoid (myself included). It's hard to feel like a story is finished when the plot hasn't been tied up and clearly resolved. I thought it was a nice twist for Harry and Hermione to not really get together, and only have a glimmer of a future relationship dangled in front of them at the end. It was really sweet and very well put together both in flow and in grammar. Well done! It was a nice Christmas in July fic for me :)

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Review #3, by Gabriela The Perfect Present

24th June 2013:
Such a lovely story!
I would love to read the entire story. :)

Author's Response: After doing this I sort of liked it and decided to leave it as a one shot: I felt like adding too much or too little would undermine it. But who knows, I may change my mind :) thank you so very much! I'm so happy you enjoyed it!

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Review #4, by Cynthia The Perfect Present

17th June 2013:
beautiful *-* i just gave 9 because i wanted a kiss u.u ahaha xD

Author's Response: Oh, wow, affectionate one aren't you? :) But thank you, I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

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Review #5, by xanver The Perfect Present

15th May 2013:
Cute. Silly Hermione getting all insecure at the last moment and not picking up on the cues he was giving her - though that's such a girl (and Hermione!) thing to do. Overthinking has always been my biggest flaw, too!

Author's Response: Yeah, I wanted to make this one as realistic as possible :) people mess up and have confusing feelings and don't always just BAM fall in love. I'm glad you like it and thanks for reviewing!!

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Review #6, by hpfanficfanpollmod The Perfect Present

30th April 2013:
Dear EpiskeyPM,

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CATEGORY: BEST ROMANCE for "The Perfect Present"

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Author's Response: HOLY CRAP WHY AM I JUST SEEING THIS. OMFG. WOW WOW WOW. Who nominated me what's going on omfg this is amazing. I'm sorry I haven't been on but wow this is insane. I wrote this in like an hour or so! Jesus okay I need to stop freaking out but I will go check this out good heavens thank you!

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Review #7, by Kc The Perfect Present

28th April 2013:
I think the phrase you want is "her smile thanked him" instead of "welcomed him" as Hermione came in e door, she did not open the door for Harry. HJP was the welcomer. Other than that, it was a great little story.

Author's Response: Oh, wow, definitely so. It's little things I always overlook. Thank you! But also thank you for reviewing, I'm glad you liked it :3

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Review #8, by Jason Potter The Perfect Present

10th March 2013:
Hey there! I just stumbled onto this one today... its so cute! I will spare you of my Hermione long length of reviews today, but it was cute and i Loved it!!

Author's Response: Double post, whoops!

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Review #9, by Jason Potter The Perfect Present

10th March 2013:
Hey there! I just stumbled onto this one today... its so cute! I will spare you of my Hermione long length of reviews today, but it was cute and i Loved it!!

Author's Response: Don't even, I love your reviews ;) But eee, glad you found it and liked it! Thanks!!

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Review #10, by LWJ2 The Perfect Present

18th February 2013:
I like it, very nicely done. Thanks for writing and sharing this.

Author's Response: Aw, thanks :) and you are very welcome!

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Review #11, by pooch25 The Perfect Present

27th January 2013:
Excellent short story. Your take on Harry and Hermione's personalities is refreshing. It's nice to see them treated as characters that are human and fallible instead of angsty teenagers or all powerful beings.

Author's Response: Well thanks :) I've always found stories that make the characters too perfect or too ridiculously flawed that it was almost comical to lose my interest, simply due to the fact that it was no longer realistic.

So yeah, thanks! I appreciate you taking the time to review, and I'm really happy you enjoyed it!

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