Hello! I really liked this story! It was a nice little snapshot of Teddy's life, and I think you did a really great job of establishing his character in a short story like this. I also liked his hair changing with his mood! Green would be pretty hard to hide! I didn't see any grammar things, and overall this was a really great story, and it was fun to read! 10/10 Cassie :)Author's Response: Hey there! I'm glad you liked it, writing Teddy was fun! Thanks for the review! :) Report Review
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