I can see Rose crushing on Scorpius in the future. He speaks his mind, and he isn't afraid of birds. He must be like a god!

Author's Response: Oh I know! Perfect boy hahah and yes, but it won't be easy hahah

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I really like this and I'm pretty sure in gonna follow this story through but i dont like how all of then are in the same year except James like at least make Fred in the same as him or something and Lily shouldnt even be there shes two years younger than Al or Rose. Your writing us excellent, dont get me wrong but these little things bother me. The portrayal of Hugo being so baby like also bothered me, hes nine years old not really at the age to cry over an ice cream, throw a tantrum or plead but not cry. I cant wait for you to introduce Scorpius! I hope you dont find me too harsh,

Author's Response: Aw no thank you for taking the time to point everything out, I really do appreciate it! It did bother me the way all my characters were a bit to babyish for their ages and I'll make sure to improve that in the next chapters, thank you so much for an honest review and I hope you like the rest of it! :)

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Hi,

This story is really interesting so far. I've never read a Rose Weasley story like this. I really like your characterization of her.

I was a bit confused though as to why Lily and Albus were both first years as Lily in the books, is two years younger then him.

I hope you update soon.
Charlie

Author's Response: Hi, i'm glad you like the way i chose to portray Rose, i mean she's pretty young so far so we couldn't have her normal sassy self right? haha
Actually, the fact that Lilly way younger than Albus really did just slip my mind, no excuses there! Thank you for pointing it out though :)

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I really like this so far! :D
I hope you do update it soon! I really enjoy Rose's thoughts!

Author's Response: : Aw thank you! Glad you like it!
Should have the next chapter up soon :)


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I really like this so far! :D
I hope you do update it soon! I really enjoy Rose's thoughts!

Author's Response: Aw thank you! Glad you like it!
Should have the next chapter up soon :)

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