I love Scorpius and Rose. It's that cheezy romance everyone likes. I think your story is very promising and I'll keep on reading it. You just keep up the good work and I'll just continue to post reviews. :)

Author's Response: This is so sweet! :)
I'm glad you find this promising. I have the story planned out. I'm just very pressed for time, unfortunately. These reviews do keep me going, though. So I will try and update this one soon! :) Thank you!
In the meantime, watch this space! I'm working on another Scorose fic, with a dark background. It's very different though.
Anyway, thanks for the review! Means so much :)
-RandomWriter

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This is a really good story! The plot and characters are good, and so is your writing. There are some spelling and grammatical errors, though.

Author's Response: Hey! :)
It's true that I had written those chapters in a hurry, so it is quite possible that there might be mistakes. So please do tell me if you find any. I'll correct them right away! Thank you so much for telling me and for reviewing, of course! :)
-RandomWriter

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Nice update, enjoyed meeting Rose's male friend :D

As for Dom, maybe something twitched her veela parts ;)

Author's Response: Thanks Avanell :)
I wasn't to happy with this chapter actually.
But good to know that you liked it :D
Thanks for the review! :)
Love
RandomWriter :p

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Hey,

It's me again! Great Chapter by the way! I much preferred it to the first! I hope you update soon!

WildCat

Author's Response: Hey :)
Thank you so much!
Please tell me you saw the dedication?
Love
RandomWriter :)


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you need to make your chapters longer. MUCH longer. Otherwise it was gr8! ;)

Author's Response: Yes, I know. Considering this is my first story, I just thought I'd test it out first. So, I didn't really write much.
Read Chapter 2. Hopefully, you won't be disappointed :p
Thanks for the review! :D

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Hey,

I enjoyed your first chapter and I always had a soft spot for Scorpious/Rose fics! Maybe if you were to make the chapters a little longer, it would be more interesting! Also, if you requested a banner from TDA, more people would click on your story because it has a banner! I hope you don't mind me giving tips and update soon!

WildCat

Author's Response: Hello Wildcat! :)
Of course I don't mind. In fact, it makes me quite happy. I'd love to improve on this.
This is my first fic and I just thought I'd test the waters, first. Hence, the short chapter.
I've started writing chapter 2. So that should be up in a while.
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! :) Really appreciate it!

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