MUHAHAHA. i already love this story and the way you write, so sophisticated and all that. i loved the way you set up scorpius's character; he seems as cool as cheese.
love it! onto the next chapter, i saw. screw you, history assignment :DAuthor's Response: Thanks so much :) Report Review
PLEASE, PLEASE UPDATE! There's only so many times one can read this fan-fic over...Author's Response: I've started the update, it should be up in maybe two weeks - sorry, I know that's forever but school is insane : Report Review
OH GOOD CHAPTER!
dead body time yay :)
haha but good job it was really fun and easy to read. super interesting!
but seriously how psycho are those past students... like calm down its not the hunger games for crying out loud! you dont need to chase some boy through the school and be all evil and stuff...
oh and good job with the quidditch scene - all your research paid off! it was a good scene!
keen for next chapter!Author's Response: It's not the hunger games, no. It's Hogwarts, and it's HARD CORE.
Thanks :) Report Review
SERIOUSLY I LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE KEEP WRITING, LOVE!Author's Response: I promise to keep writing :) Report Review
Oh. My. God. Did you Sirius-ly just leave it there!?! talk about a cliff-hanger! I really hate you at the moment. (Jk you're a great author and I wouldn't know what to do w/out this fan-fic!!!)Author's Response: Oh gosh, I always love your reviews.
And yeah, I sirius-ly left it there.
Don't worry, I make up for it next chapter. Rosius scene coming right up :) Report Review
YAY PLOTLINE! As usual, amazing Author's Response: PLOTLINE :) Report Review
Wow, kids can be cruel, didn't even tell about an accident. It really was a very good chapter, gripping. see you soon.Author's Response: Thanks so much :) I wasn't entirely sure how it would work, especially with the different perspectives, so I'm glad you liked it. I'm actually half way through chapter 6 - and it's probably horrid, because I'm in a terrible place in my head at the moment. I'll post it when I'm able though. Report Review
good chapter, amazing story! keep it up!
also just so you know i shall be bugging you until the next chapter is up :) i'll get eliza to help me ... MWH HAAHAHHAHAHAHAHA!
but seriously you're a great writer!Author's Response: You're the best, Erica, seriously :) Report Review
oh my goodness i loved the speech james did :D
brilliant chapter! loving the story so far!Author's Response: Thanks bubs :) Report Review
good chapter. laughed at the part about filch :)
good job writing this- its really great
onto chapter 3!Author's Response: The part about Filch was my favourite thing in that entire chapter so cool :) Report Review
hey Erica here
so i told you i would read this and here i am- talk about reliable :)
anyway i knew i would like this story when you were telling me about it and yep i really do like it a lot! good job on writing such a great first chapter.
ok gonna read chap 2 nowAuthor's Response: Oh my God, Erica. Also, thank-you :) Report Review
This chapter was AMAZAWEONDERASITCOALLY! don't look at me like that-- it's a word! (Maybe...)
anyway, I read (and reviewed) this chapter a long time ago, I just didn't have an account (Ima newbie!) so just wanted to tell you how awesome this fanfiction is and that you are a fantastic author (If you're working on anymore fan-fics could you tell me the names?!?) and that I'm completely loyal-- 100% Author's Response: Okay, so the last part totally made me giggle. I am working on another one, but so far I have like, none of it except in my head. It's more planned that Blue Roses, which is a little scary, but okay. I might start writing it soon...ish. Thank-you so much for reviewing every time, it's the best :) Report Review
You shouldn't apologize for having a filler, not if it was as amazingly written as the rest of the fanfiction-- which it totally was. You better keep writing! (P.S. it kinda made me sad when I saw that someone had reviewed before me...)Author's Response: Well, I've finished the next chapter and it should be up soon (but chapter 6 is nowhere near done!) and ch 5 definitely has plotline :) Thank-you so much for always liking my chapters, it's the best feeling. Report Review
Awesome. I like how Rose seems to have just fallen into place, just one of the guys. She's going to have a rough time dateing. lolAuthor's Response: Yeah, she won't be having fun at all with that. But the boys *cough* Raphael *cough* might enjoy giving her next boytoy some grief :) Report Review
YO AISHA IT'S "SARA" ;) Its really amusing watching everyone comment my name ahah :) p.s. when can I expect next chapter?Author's Response: I'm sending it in for validation now, so a few days I guess?
And yes, I've loved seeing the comment this chapter especially ;) Report Review
WOW really, I am dumbstruck. this fan-fiction is the best I've EVER read and u better keep writing. seriously. you are an amazing author. (P.S. I love how u put smiley faces after your comment replies!!!)Author's Response: Wow, oh my gosh, thank-you. That's a huge compliment, so just thank-you.
You get two smileys :) :) Report Review
I LOVE this story :D !!! If you stopped writing it I would DIE!!! I hope your competitive side is working, cause I would really like an update soon!!! thx for writing this story, it's the best fan-fiction I have ever read. ;PAuthor's Response: Wow. I mean, wow, thank-you. I'll try to get a chapter up soon :) Report Review
I really love this story! Please keep posting! You're a great author!
And Saira, thank you for telling your friend to keep writing!Author's Response: Thank-you so much! It's great to get feedback :) Report Review
Saira is a good friend and has accomplished what friends are for. I think she proved you were capible to write an awesome story. Your new chapter was fun and showed how teens view downed relationships. Scorpius wanted to show that he moved on and Rose was freaking hours after the fact. The girl had to be running around half numb. You did an awesome job on the chapter, Keep it up.Author's Response: Saira's lovely - and yeah, I'm really glad she keeps hounding me for chapters! Also, I'm really happy that you thought their reactions were satisfactory, thank-you so much for your review :) Report Review
pleze write more!?!?!?!? you are such a great author, and this is the best fan-fiction I have eva read!!! I need to read more!!!Author's Response: Thank-you so much! That really means alot to me. The next chapter should be up soon :) Report Review
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE :D
come on publish chapter 5 already I want to see who _ (you know what)
amazing chapter btw, but I told you that ages ago :D
P.s. UPDATE PLEASEAuthor's Response: I finished writing chapter 5 at one in the morning the other day. It is done. IT IS DONE.
Muhahahahaha. Report Review
When is the next chapter comin out?!?!?!?!?!lAuthor's Response: It's should be out in a few days. I've sent it in for validation, so hopefully sooner rather than later! It's great to hear back from you :) Report Review
I NEED MORE MORE MORE!!! (PS your writing iz awesome...)Author's Response: Thank-you so much! I sent chapter three in for validation yesterday, so it should be arriving in just a few days :) Report Review
some people write really really bad fan-fictions and they use improper grammar (Not that I'm a freak, it just drives me mad to read something like that) But yours Is AMAZING! When will the next chapter be out? looking forward to it!Author's Response: Thank-you so much! I did notice one little mistake I think in this chapter, so I've sent it for editting. Basically I just make a bunch of people read it before I even send it in for validation.
I'm about to send in chapter 3 now :) Report Review
Oh miii gossh so excitedAuthor's Response: I'm really glad you think so :) Report Review
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