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Review #1, by Weaslbey Kill the Reason

22nd December 2013:
I loved this chapter! Louis made me laugh so much lol, I hope we get to see more of him:) can't wait till the me t chapter to see what happens with Millie and james

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Review #2, by Albus Potter's Woman Kill the Reason

16th December 2013:
Hello again :)

So a fast update. Thank you very much. And you didn't disappoint with the wackiness. You know I just knew that Cat was going to say something dimwitted in this chapter to end with a bang. And lets face it. Expecting James Potter to not snog other girls is pretty dimwitted. As mean as it sounds.

One thing I think you should correct is the incorrect spelling of pout. "Thus began the eye brow lowering, the squinty eyes and the pount." Also eyebrow is one word. I also think this chapter was quite short in comparison to your other ones :(

Good job writing though

~Albus Potter's Woman

Author's Response: Hello!
I'm glad you liked it again and thanks for pointing those out, I'll have to go and correct them :)

Thanks you for another lovely review :)


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Review #3, by Albus Potter's Woman Miles the Leech

15th December 2013:
Oh my God this is too funny. I love the completely original and selfish narration of the main character and her take on absolutely everything. Pessimism has never been more hilarious. The absolute insanity of it all is just amazing. Well done

-Albus Potter's Woman

Author's Response: Oh my God thank you! It's crazy what people will do when they think the world's about to end,
I'm glad you like it! :)


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Review #4, by StoryLover Tales of arrogance, midgets and James Potter

29th December 2012:
This looks like a start to a very interesting story. Definately keep it up, I am interested in what Millie does. 9/10

Author's Response: Thanks for the review and I'll definitely try to keep it up as I'm quite excited for it haha :)

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