Overall, I really enjoyed this. The plot, and the characters is engaging and they easily caught my captivation. There are parts however that seem a bit unrealstic because the plot just jumps forward. For instance when Marie's interview of Natayla turns into a friendship for them. It could have used some desription on why Natalya was willing to be friends after her basically rude demenor during the start of teh interview. You also have a lot of spelling grammar mistakes. I would recommend getting a beta. Now, I'm really enjoying this story, so I really hope to see it updated soon, and hope that this review helps you in future chapters. I really like your writing style. Good work. Report Review
I am really enjoying this story. I like how Natalya is such a unique protagonist, and the intrigue you've created regarding her true motives and her relationship with Draco. The fact that the plot you're creating is so outside-the-box that the story could really go anywhere is a huge draw as well. I can't wait to read more! :) Report Review
I like this story, and I seriously doubt I could write a dark main character quite like this. Update soon!
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