19 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Bruce Chapter 11

20th August 2014:
Hay maya
Its Bruce again ive just reread this story again and you are a realy realy good writer you get the people down to tee this is another very powerful story espesh with harry having P.T.S from the battle and his past life you get the feelings so right it will be interesting to see were you go with this but i think you should stick with just the harry and gin side of things rather then the rest like you have done so far but all in all a very good read and look forward to your next chapter on this and your hugo story so keep them coming please as i so look forward to reading your story's. you take care now and hopefully talk soon by for now.
Ive forgot to say that i read another story that i think you should read as your both on the same par
writing style ie very powerful story's i think would like it also even tho it was not finish't i think you would be interested in the style you both have its called From the Ashes by Andrews Quill on this site its a shame he never finish't it but i would be interested to see what you think of his style as i say i think it is very much alike but hay what the hell do i know i dont have a very special talent like you writer's have. but hay ho see what you make of it. Bruce

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I always get a little thrill of excitement when I see there is a new review. I'm very happy that you enjoy my stories and my writing so much. I've heard different opinions on me writing, but I take both complimentary and critical reviews to heart.
I love improving myself, especially in a skill like this, so please tell me if you think something could be done better.
I know I took a chance by including a little Ron/Hermione in the story, but they are my favourite pairing, so what can I do...

I will definitely check on the story that you recommend, it sounds like I could learn form it.
I don't consider myself a writing talent either, to be honest, I was reading stories here years before I ever posted my own story and I only wrote it because I was on a holiday in Scotland and it rained and I was bored. But somehow after that first story I got hooked on writing. I have about 10 stories still unpublished (also unfinished) that I work on form time to time.
I find writing really a lot of fun and that's all that motivates me to do it. It's like playing make believe when you're grown up and to old to actually play make believe.
I often find life as a grown up can be extremely boring and this makes me happy. I hope you have something like that to make life less dull. Reading is good too!

Well enough of my ramblings. Thank you for reading my stories and telling me how much you enjoy them. I'll try my best with the coming chapters. Curious what you'll say about them...


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Review #2, by Hogwarts Varsity Swim Capton Chapter 6

17th June 2013:
Oh my goodness, Ohh my goodness! Please update soon!

Author's Response: I really plan on updating after this weekend. I'm up to my ears in work at the moment but this Friday is a big deadline and after that I have tons of time again.

Nice to know you liked it so much :)

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Review #3, by CarleePotter Chapter 9

5th May 2013:
Really good job so far!!! I love Harry/Ginny stories and this is a very different view of it! :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much.
Yeah I came up with the idea over the summer and I really like writing it. It's a lot of fun. I hope you'll stick around for the next chapter. I'm busy writing it.
Thanks again for the review and the compliments.

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Review #4, by Hogwarts Varsity Swim Capton Chapter 9

7th April 2013:
Such a good chapter! The I love you'd were beautiful! Can't wait to see whats next!

Author's Response: Thank you! It was lots of fun writing it. I don't really know what will come next... It's still a surprise for me as well. I have a vague plan though.
Thanks for the review and come back to check with the story soon!

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Review #5, by Hogwarts Varsity Swim Capton Chapter 8

24th March 2013:
In response to my last review, I love that he picked the flower. It reminded him of Ginny and made him happy.
As for this chapter, it was only a matter of time befor she broke to. But I feel that she needs to let Harry in and as does he. They need to be with each other. Both went so long with out that it seems unfair for there love to not be there. But that's just the hopeless romantic in me. Keep writing, it is beautiful!

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much for your beautiful words!

I thought this needed to happen, it will make them stronger, but it won't be over in a blink of an eye. There will be some more drama before they make up...
I hope you don't mind that... it really has to happen.

Your review made me really happy! Thank you!


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Review #6, by Hogwarts Varsity Swim Capton Chapter 7

16th March 2013:
I really love this story. It is wonderful. The whole thing with the cookies is great! I love seeing Harry finally let Ginny in

Author's Response: Hey,

Thanks for the compliment. This is my favorite to write, really. It's great to hear you like to read it.
What did you like the best, apart from baking cookies?

The next chapter will be a bit more dramatic. I'd love to know what you think of it. once it's up. If you have suggestions for the story let me know!

thanks again for the review!

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Review #7, by Richelle chapter 1

10th March 2013:
You overly use commas. Other than that It's great! I love the story line so far. It's how I imagined Harry's reaction after the war.

Author's Response: Hey, thanks.
I know I tend to make too long sentenses. I hope it does not anoy you too much.
thanks for your review and enjoy reading!

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Review #8, by TheUltimateHarryPotterFangirl Chapter 5

20th February 2013:
Nice job. I like the book so far. I'll be waiting for more. :)

Author's Response: Thank you!

I have the next chapter in beta reading already.
keep an eye on it in the upcomming week!


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Review #9, by Cat Chapter 5

19th February 2013:
This is a great story and I hope that you will write more!

Author's Response: Thank you for the compliment.

I certainly will write more. This is my own personal favorite and it's not yet done. I already have written more even. It's being beta read right now but is will be posted this week.

Just a little patience.


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Review #10, by Hogwarts Varsity Swim Capton Chapter 5

18th February 2013:
Mehhh! I love this! Everyone makes it so harry is fine. But you don't it is wonderfully written!

Author's Response: Thank you!
I was thinking along the same lines, why does everybody always asume he will be instantly fine because he won the battle... it did not make sense to me and thus this story was born.

Glad you like it so much. The next chapter is in beta reading now. Will be up in a week I hope.


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Review #11, by Bailey chapter 3

5th February 2013:
There are a few spelling errors, but overall I think this is a really good concept.

Author's Response: Thank you!

I'm working on my spelling, I'll put it put for Beta reading.

look out for the next chapter this weekend...

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Review #12, by DaniPotterhead chapter 4

2nd February 2013:
Where are they are going? I await the next chapter!!!

Author's Response: You don't have to wait to long, I am alreade half way done.
I won't tell you now, because that would spoil the surprise.

thanks for the review!

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Review #13, by Magicalis Writer chapter 3

12th January 2013:
It's starting to become clear that you don't really know what's coming next-but that's perfectly alright!
So the next chapter would be about seeing Luna, right? Focus on she and Harry's friendship. Or perhaps she could talk to him about his mourning, as she had also lost a parent.
You could also skim over this, having a brief summary at the beginning about the days/weeks that you decided to pass. Maybe Harry and Ginny go out on a date to London? Or Hermione and Ginny try to convince Harry and Ron to go back to Hogwarts?
Great chapter, though. Very nice flow. I'm really looking forward to reading the next chapter!

Author's Response: Those are really good idea's, I do really like Luna as a character, but I thinks it's really hard to write her convincingly. she would be a lot of fun to write a chapter on, though, wouldn't she? Maybe i'll let Harry stay there for a bit, to clear his head or something.

A date between Harry and Ginny would be great too... something to lighten the mood.
I'm going to think about it.

I like your comments, they are really helpfull. Thank you!
If you have time and you like to beta-read my story I would not mind either. :)


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Review #14, by Magicalis Writer Chapter 2

12th January 2013:
Another brilliant chapter!
I would continue in whichever way you see suit- are you planning on going canon?
If so, Harry would begin training to be an Auror very soon, Ron would work at the shop with George, and Hermione and Ginny would be going back to school. I also write Harry/Ginny after the war, but it's off canon. Whichever way you plan to go, I'd be glad to help.
You really have talent, though. Embrace it.

Author's Response: Wow, thanks, I did not know Ron was going to help George. I like to stay as much canon as possible, but some time I go wandering for a bit. If you have a good idea for a plot that might be helpfull. I'm stuck on that.

Thank for the great compliments.

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Review #15, by Magicalis Writer chapter 1

12th January 2013:
This was quite honestly the most perfect and well-written introductory to a story I have seen so far! Slight mistakes, but other than that I loved it.
The way you demonstrated Molly's concern for Harry was captivating, and the entire chapter was excellent!

Author's Response: thank you very much, I really like this chapter too.

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Review #16, by Bailey Chapter 2

4th January 2013:
PLEASE WRITE MORE. There are a few grammatical issues but other than that I really like it.

Author's Response: Thank you very very much!
I have another chapter ready, but I'm not quite sure of it. I'll post it, if you tell me what you think. This story it realy a hard one to write, but i like in nonetheless.


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Review #17, by lauraf68 chapter 1

3rd January 2013:
Wonderful little start you have here. A few typo's, but your story content is strong. Keep up the good work. I look forward to more. --Lauraf68

Author's Response: Thank you so much. The next chapter is waiting to be validated... I hope you'll like it.
I don't know where this story is going yet so if you have a suggestion let me know.

Thanks for the review!

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Review #18, by Katy chapter 1

27th December 2012:
learn to spell! learn correct grammar! use an editor!!

Author's Response: Well. it's not always easy to write proper english when it's not your first language. Please understand that I'm doing the best I can with what I've got.
Thank you!

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Review #19, by GinnyMollyP chapter 1

18th December 2012:
awesome cant wait for the next onee =)

Author's Response: Well thank you!
As soon as I can post again I will ad the next chapter. I have it written already.

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