Aw this was such a sad little story! It is even sadder that Lily's fears come true, it is their last christmas. I liked your descriptions a lot, especially in the beginning. I enjoyed James' light nature as well. This was short but really very sweet. I would have loved it to be longer though and get a deeper glimpse into the lives of James, Lily, and Harry. An appearance of Sirius would have been awesome too. Good work! Cheers! AD (AditiDraco95) P.S. Yes, I decided to randomly pop in with a random review for you Summer! Happy Valentines =) Report Review
navigation
home
search HPFF read stories write stories login/register get help site links forums podcasts Terms of Service Site Rules contact us
categories & genres
Genre: - crossover - drama - fluff - general - horror/dark - humor - mystery - romance - action/adventure - angst - au - young adult
Popular Pairings: - harry/ginny - ron/hermione - james/lily - draco/hermione - more...
Format: - one-shot - short story - novella - novel - short story collection - songfic
quick links
my account ToS random story site rules help merchandise
fanfictionworld.net