Can't wait to read the next chapter!! This is a amazing start:)

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I like your writing style. 10/10, so you better update soon! :)

Author's Response: Thank you very much!!! I shall update very, very soon! :)

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MUHAHAHAH. EVIL LAUGH. I LOVED IT! IT WAS FUNNY! AND GOOD! AND FUNNY!
this story is already epic, bro. you are just that type of epic kind of writer. understand?
good. good.
excellent. i shall go now. eat a pie. then a fudge muffin. they are quite excellent you know. now, for some parting words of jeebus...

HOSANNA. HEYSANNA. SANNA. SANNA. HO. SANNA HEY SANNA HO SANNA (SANA)
HE JC JC JC WONT YOU FIGHT FOR ME? SANNA HO SANNA HEY SUPERSTAR!

Author's Response: MWAHAHA I'm glad you liked it bro! All thanks to you, my inspiration! good, good. :) FUDGEMUFFINS FTW. BLOBWINS.
Thanks man :)

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BANANA
W.O.W
amazing story, i love it. keep adding more, its awesome i love it. lettuce sandwich, penguin.
hello.
keep up the coolness :)

Author's Response: Thank you very, very much!
Hello to you too. And I shall keep adding more seeing as I am on holidays woot!
Peace Out :)

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OksoHI!

Thought I'd click a little big on this story and say that yes, I did enjoy the first 5 paragraphs and decided to read on, of such.

And it was good.
V good.
Splendiddlyumpcious actually, which is more than I usually say for the first chapter of stories.

Kool, kool.
Glad chapter deux is nearly finito,
okcoolsoI'mgoingtoendnow
(your now faithful reader, dumdededummm:)

Bunny
x x

Author's Response: THANK YOU!! thank you, thank you thank you! You are quite a funny soul. I like you :)
Your now faithful author,
silversnitch
xx

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phhhshghtalskdjf

what. the. fudge. muffins.

i reviewed just so i could say that. but scince im here and everything...BANANA.

and yes silver(racist bastard)snitch YOU NEED ME.

but it is a cool story
really
dont doubt me.

KEEP WRITING BECAUSE I LOVE IT LIKE FUDGE MUFFINS.
lOony peace out. because im hipster.

Author's Response: Thank you loony_lovegood101, you hipster ;) I may add some hipsterness in upcoming chapters because your review just sparked an idea :) Thanks a fudgemuffin load for reviewing!! :)

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Woot! I really like it so far :D I'm liking the whole Sophie thing and how she - so far - really dislikes James. Update soon because I have a feeling I'm really going to like the story :)

The writing is awesome too, but a one point you slipped in the name Joel out of the blue. I assumed you meant Ray? Aside from that minor little slip I really liked the writing. It had good flow and wasn't choppy!

mrsronaldweasley262

Author's Response: Yay! Glad you liked it! Thanks for catching onto the whole Joel thing - originally Ray's name was going to Joel. Sorry for the confusion - I will fix that. Anyway, thank you again and chapter two should be up soon! :D

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I really liked the chapter! You got me hooked from the beginning! I didn't want this too end! Keep it up and update fast! I want to know what happens next! :D

Author's Response: I'm relieved because I thought the beginning might've been a bit slow but hey, thank you so much!! I shall definately keep writing :D

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PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I really really like this story and I think it's TOTALLY amazing and I just can't bloody wait for chapter 2 and just asdfghjkl, just write already!! :D x
(Basically I like the story)

Author's Response: You have no idea how much you did for my self-esteem then. THANK YOU! Hopefully Chapter two up should be submitted by the 16th :) x

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this seems like it has a lot of potential! i like sophie and i also liked how you managed to keep the chapter interesting throughout. looking forward to an update.

Author's Response: Thank you for the read and thanks an infinite amount for being my first review! I try to keep the chapters chock-full of interesting stuff and I'm afraid I'm going to run out of ideas soon haha! Thanks again! :)

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