It seems very un-Hermione to faint at Draco's betrayal. I mean, she's is a strong, powerful woman who continued fighting even after being cruciated for long periods of time - I doubt some betrayal from a guy would make her faint? Report Review
I love it! I haven't had a chance to read fanfiction in quite awhile, but I stumbled on this one, and I'm going to make my way through it. Great job!Author's Response: Thank you very much :) I hope it doesn't disappoint! Report Review
You wrote a really good story! I really enjoy reading this! Keep up the good work! :)Author's Response: Thank you very much :) I'm glad you enjoyed the story! Report Review
This was one of my favorite chapters. It's so easy for sex scenes to come across cheesy or vulgar. The whole topic was dealt with in a very classy way and in my opinion describes the first experience pretty much every woman wishes she would have had. Thank you for creating such a beautiful fantasy.Author's Response: Thank you :) this chapter was a particularly difficult one for me to write. I wanted it to be realistic but still romantic so I'm glad you liked it :) Report Review
This was one of the most well thought out and written stories I have read on this site thus far. Thank you for sharing this enjoyable story. I am a hopeless romantic, so this was right up my alley. I hope you continue to write more stories because you clearly have talent.Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much, that's a huge compliment :) I'm so glad you enjoyed the story :) Report Review
Aw This is so cute, I didn't stop smiling while reading this. Great story (I feel like I never mentioned this)Author's Response: Thank you :D Report Review
Aw. This is so cute, I didn't stop smiling while reading this. Great story Report Review
OMG!! It's done! :'( It was fun at the same time annoying reading your story (with the whole Draco and Hermiome not being together chapters *glares*)Author's Response: Hahah I'm sorry! Please don't glare :( Report Review
OMG THE FEELS WHY MUST YOU PLAY WITH MY FEELS!?!? A really great ending to a fantastic story, though, seriously!! It's sad to see our babies grow up and mature but all good things must come to an end. :) Such cute names too for the kids!! I'm glad you decided to add an epilogue, because the closure it so much better! I guess that's why JK wrote one too. ;) Once again, wonderful job with this story, I really liked it! :) xxAuthor's Response: Please apologise to your feels from me haha!
I'm glad I decided to add an epilogue too, it does feel like I have proper closure for Draco and Hermione now. I admit it took me FOREVER to think of their names, I used Shakespearean characters because they were unusual like Hermione's but different enough for magical children :)
Thank you so much for your kind reviews, I'm looking forward to reading how LMM ends! xx Report Review
Perfect. That's all I can say. How very satisfying! xxAuthor's Response: Thank you :D xxx Report Review
This is such a cute way to end this story :3 I'm so glad you done an epilogue because I thought it should of had one! I'm really sad to see this story finish but I will read your other ones because you are a brilliant author, one of my favourties! Thankyou Author's Response: Ahh, that's really lovely, thank you! I'm glad I did one too, though I'm really sad it's over now :(
I've started a next generation fic centred around Victoire Weasley, first chapter should be up soon :) Report Review
Awesome story. I loved it.Author's Response: Thank you very much :) Report Review
Oh this was such a good end to this story! I don't know how I'm going to be able to finish mine! D: You didn't have too much mushy mushy stuff in there at all! I think it was just the right amount. All of the stories I usually read are finishing up it makes me so sad :( But you wrote this so well! :) If you wanted to I'm sure you could do a companion story, nothing majorly long like this, maybe just a short story to snapshot their future lives together and whatnot. :) Great job with this story, it really was wonderful! xxAuthor's Response: Thank you! Honestly, I don't know how I finished it, it's been my baby for months! I only planned to write about 15 or so chapters but just couldn't let it go haha. Between you and me (and anyone else that reads this!) I've submitted an epilogue, it should be up either tomorrow or Friday ;)
You'll be absolutely fine ending yours, it came surprisingly naturally to me, I think you'll know when and how to write it when the time comes. I can't wait for the next chapter of LMM! x Report Review
Hey, it's Whiskey from the forums!
The first chapter was so short, I thought I might read on :)
I must admit this is my very first Dramione ever. I know, I know - impossible in the world of hp fanfic, but I've just avoided the ship like the plague, so I remained untainted until now, haha. But I'm glad I gave this one a chance!
I enjoyed that you didn't ignore the effects of the war and that a general sadness underlay Hermione's retrn to Hogwarts. Her breaking up with Ron didn't seem forced at all. Grief can both bring people together and let them drift appart, depending on the personality.
Introducing Malfoy's change with Luna's "auras" was a great touch! It's just very...Harry Pottery, you know? These little magical details that define the characters and scenery...Made me smile! (Although you did spell "aura" as "Auror" at some point :p)
I do wonder who in their right mind would make an ex-Death Eater and murderer of the most beloved wizard of all time Head Boy, though. But I suppose you will explain that in due time.
If I could offer you some CC, then it would be to maybe do more "showing" instead of "telling". The story does begin with a bit of an info-dump. Although what you tell is helpful, it doesn't exactly convey emotions that would draw in the reader. Besides, some of these things could be revealed gradually, thus creating suspence and curiosity. Just a thought!
Thanks for the swap!Author's Response: Thanks for the swap, I really enjoyed your one shot!
I'm glad you gave Dramione a chance, I think they're very well suited. I do love Ronmione too though, hence the amicable break up, I really don't like fics that make him a cheater or violent as he's just so loveable! This was the first bit of fanfiction I ever wrote so reading it back is a little cringey and I can totally accept your CC and completely agree! I do plan on revisiting this story very soon and doing some heavy editing for the earlier chapters so thank you for the feedback.
As for Draco being Head Boy, although it doesn't say so in the story (again, I'll probably change that in editing) I'd like to think that Draco would have written to or visited McGonagall before term started to ask if they would have him back and that Dumbledore's portrait would have convinced McGonagall to give him a chance to prove himself and also give him a bit of a confidence boost in returning to a school full of people who thought very little of him.
Thanks again for the swap! Report Review
Amazing story; I've been waiting to see how it would turn out. Great ending!Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it :) Report Review
A lovely read, it was very well written and I really enjoyed your storey. I stayed up late until I finished it as I couldn't wait to see how it all played out.
:)Author's Response: Thank you so much :) I'm glad you enjoyed it and sorry for keeping you up late haha! x Report Review
wow, this is a brilliant way to end the story.
This chapter is so good, and it ended really nicely, im soo glad it wasnt a cliche ending, and not to soppy at all. I have loved the story from the beginning, and its sad to see it end, will there be any one-shots from this, i think it would be an awesome idea, maybe one of how Draco felt when he was being controlled?
Thankyou! Author's Response: Ahh thank you! I'm really glad you liked the ending, endings have never been my strong point so it's nice to know you enjoyed it. I've actually been looking for some new writing ideas so there's a good chance I'll do one that relates. Thanks for the idea and the review :D Report Review
Woohooo! I beautiful ending to a beautiful story! Thanks so much for giving me something to read! And write more for sure ;) I'll be keeping an eye out for your next... Until then.Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it :) I'll definitely be writing more :D Report Review
aw:) oh wow, I have literally followed this story since the very beginning and I love it:)
My favourite dramione fanfic definitely! It had some lovely twists and turns and I loved how it all turned out though :D
Maybe... just one last request.. I think it would be so so so so cute if you did a 10year later thing?! That would finish it off, but this was a lovely ending anyway! Thank you for some amazing reading, I love the story, please please write a new one soon! Congratulations! xAuthor's Response: Honestly I can't thank you enough for all of the lovely reviews you've left, I'm so happy that you enjoyed my story! I'm playing around with an epilogue for it so haven't changed it to 'completed' yet, so watch this space ;)
I've written a lot of one shots lately but I'm looking for some inspiration and ideas for a new story to write, I might do a next-generation one this time :)
Thank you again for taking the time to read and leave such lovely comments! Report Review
This is amazing, I cannot stop reading this wonderful writing! You are very talented. Just a gentle reminder that all numbers from 1-9 should be written out in letters!Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm glad you're enjoying it :) And thanks for the heads up about the numbers, that must have slipped past my editing. Hope you like the rest of the story x Report Review
So... I WILL be sad and probably will reread this story when it ends, but UPDATE SOON. AND u don't have to finish it in the next chapter u knowAuthor's Response: I submitted the last chapter about 5 days ago but validating is taking ages! Sadly is the last one though :( Hopefully it'll be on today/tomorrow! Report Review
she used an unforgivable, of course she does deserve azkabanAuthor's Response: I'm glad you agree, I was really in two minds about it but that's always been the law!
Thanks for reading and reviewing :) Report Review
pansy totally deserved it! let her rot in the dirty cell hahaha... yay for an update so happy to see one :) so the story is almost finish it has been a great one...Author's Response: Haha my thoughts exactly! Glad you enjoyed this chapter, the next one will be the last I think. Knowing that is putting me off finishing it though haha! Maybe I'll just keep writing until my fingers fall off!
Thanks for reading and reviewing :) Report Review
I've actually loved this fic! I'm a dramione heartthrob so... Write soon!
10/10Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you've enjoyed it so far. I'm almost done with the last chapter but struggling to finish it cause that will mean it's really over! Report Review
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