I liked this chapter a lot too. Seeing this event from Tom's PoV.
All banners require credits, by the way. I'm sorry to be a bother, but I know this for a fact because I'm an artist on TDA as well. It doesn't matter if the artist doesn't tell you to, because you are expected to anyway. It's a rule.Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! Report Review
This is very interesting. :) I don't think anybody is born without love, even Voldemort himself. Your punctuation and grammar needs a little work, but other than that the story's idea is very good. Tom's characterization as a kid was very realistic, with him sounding so annoyed by the other children in the orphanage, his lucid dreams, and willingness to control people...very excellent. Keep up the great work!
P.S: You should really credit the person who made your banner. They made it for you and it's rude not to even credit them.
~RosieAuthor's Response: Thank you Rosie! I've been wanted to write a "Tom" story for a long time, so I am excited to see where this one takes me. I'm doing my best to proof read but a few errors always seem to escape me.
Regarding the banner, the maker didn't require a credit. Thanks for the concern though! Report Review
I can't wait to reas more!Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it! I will have more posted very soon!:) Report Review
This is the first chapter In my new story! I really like how it turned out and I'm excited to see where it takes me! I'd love to read your reviews and see how you all like it! Report Review
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