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Review #1, by patronus_charm Why you?

11th July 2014:
Hi!

This was so heart-breaking and I thought you wrote George really well. His narration was really slow and passive which was really good for once as it really reflected what his life had become since the death of Fred and how he just couldnít stimulate anything at all because all seemed to be dead to him. You really did reflect how his life had been changed by it in every sentence and I really loved that. I really liked the inclusion of Angelina here too as Iíve always been fond of this ship and how they managed to pull through this grief together and perhaps try and carry on.

-Kiana
House Cup 2014 Review!

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Review #2, by hpsauce Why you?

27th January 2013:
George's feelings of loss were well displayed in this piece; his thoughts were well presented and written. I could understand George's thought process and could easily sympathise with the character.
A few errors:
'He know he was slowly losing himself' should be 'He knew'
'For awhile he had hated his brother' should be 'For a while, he had...'
'opr the memories of anyone' 'opr' should be 'or'
Aside from that, a good piece of work there :)
Thanks for entering my challenge :) I will get the results out asap on the hall of fame feed. They will probably be up in January, but no later than mid-February.
Sophie

Author's Response: Yeah I was going to go re edit the story once I got my chapter image for it. I wrote it a bit hastily and probably should've went over the spelling 1st before submitting it.

I thank you for presenting the challenge. And soon as I saw it, this story immediately popped into my head and I wrote it. I've never had inspiration that fast or strong.

I can't wait to see the results and thanks for reviewing as well =]


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Review #3, by calmbeforethestorm Why you?

22nd January 2013:
This is so heartbreaking. You captured George's leftover feelings of his brother very well. I think I saw a grammar mistake or 2 but the story was nothing short of amazing. I'm going to add it to my favorites!!

Author's Response: Yeah I was gonna change the grammar mistakes when I got my chapter image for the story. lol

So glad you reviewed this story. It has been my 1st one in a couple of years.

Thank you for leaving me yet another lovely review!


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Review #4, by Hannah Why you?

8th January 2013:
oh my god. bravo. so heartbreaking!

Author's Response: Thank you =] Glad you took the time to leave me a wonderful review

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