Very good chapter. I do hope that Al surprises them both and dashes their day-dreams :) Thy will just have to think of some other way to get back at Al, that isn't so easy :)Author's Response: Yeah, he's probably got a few tricks up his sleeve that they don't know about :P Report Review
Glad to see some happiness for some of the characters. How long is this story going to be? It seems that after all the effort you have put into making Lucy and Scorpius so perfect and cute, it will be really hard to turn this into a Rose/Scorpius story that is convincing of their love and happiness, as well as it not being a huge problem for Lucy when they get together. But I'm interested to see how you will try to do that as I like the Rose Scorpius pairing better. Thanks for sharing your writing.Author's Response: Thank you for reading :) I know how I want to make Rose and Scorpius happen, but it might happen in a sequel after all. I planned for it to be all together here, but I feel like the story is getting quite long, so I'm not sure :/ Report Review
Awesome chapter! Percy was a Big surprise to me. I thought he was a good guy. But nopeAuthor's Response: Thank you :) I'm glad you enjoyed :) Report Review
I love how all your chapters are songs!Author's Response: Thank you :) I hope you like my story :) Report Review
I like the spell to hear the song. Scorpius might be able to make Lucy famous someday. Awesome update, loved the message trail. See you again soon :)Author's Response: Thank you :) I had to learn a bit of Latin to make up that one :P But then I forgot what epistula meant... anyway, thanks for reading :) Report Review
Im so glad Clem is going to get help. I really like her character. I'd hate to see her gone. Lucy on the other hand, I don't see how she is going to win her battle. Just how long is Scorpius going to deal with a depressing girl friend. A guy can seriously take so much.
Great chapter, see you next time :)Author's Response: Thank you :) Clem is one of my favourite characters, which I guess is kind of stupid of me to say because I wrote her. but anyway, I like her :P Thank you for reading my story :) Report Review
Suppose whatever Percy has to say in the next chapter will seal her fate. She better be a star if she ever wants to face her mother again. I dont think living on the streets is an option for Lucy.Author's Response: She's still at school for now, so I she's got some time to figure out where she'll go after :) Report Review
I really like this chapter! Wonderful, yet again. I'm loving the initiation idea. Also, just as a reminder, what year are Clementine, Albus, Rose, Lucy, and Scorpius in? And James? I think what James does to all those girls is sad, but great story, nonetheless! Write more soon!
~RebeccaAuthor's Response: I'm glad you like my story :) The main five are in sixth year now and James is in seventh year :) Report Review
Please update soon!!!Author's Response: I'm so sorry I haven't! I know it's no excuse, but I've been busy. I'll have the next chapter up as soon as possible :) Report Review
I'm kind of confused right now. Is Albus in Slytherin?Author's Response: Yeah, I've decided to make him Slytherin. Sorry if that was unclear D: Report Review
I think you need to change what POV it says. in the last part of this chapter it says 'Albus POV' but I'm pretty sure it's supposed to be Clementine... For a second i was like "What? Albus is trying to curl his hair and dyed it blonde?" It was weird. O.oAuthor's Response: D: You are absolutely right... how embarrassing.. . I've changed that now :P Report Review
I actually like Max. Despite him just being...nice. One dimensional. But I like him lol. He seems sweet.
I actually really like Santana. She and Albus are so cute :).
Wish we can resolve Clem's and Rose's issues soon.
Lucy pulling a crazy girl stunt is really weird, I didn't like that even when I usually love Lucy and Scorpius together. That and Scorpius ditching Quidditch for her. Not cool :/ I still like them, just not as much.
Read this all in one go, it's pretty addicting. Keep it up! Could use some more careful proofreading though.Author's Response: Thank you for reading :) I will try to find some time to proofread, thank you for bringing it up :) I don't really like how Scorpius quit Quidditch either :( Although, it's not completely for Lucy and he probably didn't really have much of a future in it anyway, but it is something he enjoyed. Maybe he'll join again later.
Anyway, Lucy is getting weird. I think the trauma is getting to her and she's getting all rebellious and such.
Thank you again for reading :) I will be updating again soon :) Report Review
Yeah, Al and the GF are working pretty quick. Rose seems to be going through the motions trying to figure out this guy isn't the one for her. Scorpius seems to be with a girl who works fast herself. Like having a Church mouse going out with an extreme sport fanatic. She is going to burn out poor Scorpius. They may have to break up for his healths sake lol.Author's Response: Lucy is definitely wearing out Scorpius. He might be getting tired of her antics :P I kind of don't like Rose's boyfriend. I mean, he's a nice enough guy, but I don't like him. Which is kind of stupid since I wrote him, but whatever :P Thank you for your comments :) Report Review
I think the party went pretty well. al with a new girl thats a nice way to start the year.Author's Response: Thank you reviewing again :) I'm glad you like it :) Report Review
You could always waltz through 6th year with a few highlights and run right into 7th year finish the story up proper.especially if your not planning a sequel for this story. I'm still trying to see where this is supposed to be a Rose and Scorpius pairing? I'm enjoying the Lucy and Scorpius, and they get along well together.Author's Response: Hello :)
I think I would like to do a sequel for this story since I'm not really sure if I want to make this one tooo long. Also, Rose and Scorpius were supposed to be a bigger part of this... but then they weren't... They might show up later in the story though. Report Review
I'm in shock, I did think it was nice though that other parents would be willing to have Lucy. Percy seems devistated. I suppose we know who wears the pants in that family. I hope Lucy takes off in the artsey world. She will need to get a place of her own, at some point. She needs to make her own way in the world. Can't hide with the boyfriend forever.Author's Response: Hello!
Thank you for reading my story :) I've always thought that Percy was a bit of a pushover, but I think he'll eventually stand up to his wife, I mean, she's horrible :P And I'd like Lucy to be successful too, but for right now she's only 16 and still in school. Maybe she'll make it big someday though :) Report Review
This chapter was realy cute! I'd just love if someone put a memory charm on Lucy, after they break up (I still have that idea). That way, she might not feel so bad. And Scorpious will love Rose, so he'll be ok too. I know. It's not possible. I just want to see everyone I like doing well, all the time. I'm not sure about Rose reaction when that happens. After all, she is her cousin. I might be a little mad at her (even though I want that to happen).
Now, I'm really worried about the next chapter. I've just checked the lyrics of skyscraper. I think I will be sad after reading it.
InesAuthor's Response: Hello again :)
I'm glad you like my story :D You are quite right about the next chapter (actually, the next few chapters). They aren't too happy, but they're important :P I actually started this story with the intention of Scorpius and Lucy having some brief fling and then Rose and Scorpius right away, but then I just fell in love with Lucy and Scorpius and now I'm dragging their relationship out :P I can't bear to break them up, although I have to :(
Anyway, I hope you continue reading :D
Stefani Report Review
Thanks for fixing the POV thing. It really helps!
Scor and Luce are so cute together! I'm getting really worried about them. I still think that they'll break up. I hope that it won't affect too much his friendship with Al.
InesAuthor's Response: Hello again :D
Thank you for another review and thank you for sticking with my story :D I can tell you that one of your predictions/hopes comes true and the other doesn't :)
Stefani Report Review
I like this story. It's good to know what everyone thinks, but maybe you could identify the POV when you change. Sometimes it takes a while to know who's talking/thinking.
I don't like James. I believe that he'll hurt Clem. Besides, I'm rooting for Al.
I REALLY hope that when Scorpious and Lucy break up, it won't be too bad (they have to do it, so he can be with Rose). I wouldn't like to see Lucy sad for too long. Maybe she could meet someone else and fall for him? And Scorpious could find out that he's in love with Rose at the same time. That way, no one would be too hurt (I can always dream).
Great story, please keep posting!
InesAuthor's Response: Thank you so much! I will definitely fix the POV thing, thank you for bringing that up :) I can't tell you what happens, but I want to so badly!
Anyway, thank you for reviewing and I hope you continue to enjoy my story :)
Stefani Report Review
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