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Review #1, by Chivalrous Chapter Two

21st June 2015:
I loved this chapter! Although switching POVs so many times in one chapter can be confusing so watch out for that.

I absolutely adore your characterization of Roxanne! It's so different from any other Roxie I've ever read!

I also loved the insight you gave us into Nashira's world, she's very refreshing for a Slytherin!

So all in all, great chapter! I hope you post soon!

Sincerely,
Ireland

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Review #2, by XOdannieXO Chapter Two

16th June 2015:
Your banner is amazing. I wanted to tell you that in the first review but I forgot. It's good. And for a moment I mistook a scene - the one in which Roxanne describes Frank? Yeah I thought she was still talking about Freddie. You can imagine my shock when I saw "I have had a crush on him". Embarrassing. But keep going =)

Author's Response: You commented on the banner! Ah you have no idea how happy this makes me! The people at The Dark Arts are fantastic and I am (if you couldn't tell) just a little extremely excited about getting one. It's also my first banner, so it makes me feel like an OFFICIAL author right now. About the whole thing with Frank and Freddie, yeah, I was kinda worried about that. I seriously considered changing Frank's name to something different, but I have found that apparently I am super attached to the idea that Neville names his children after his parents. Hopefully you with bear with it though and keep reading! Thanks again for your review!!!

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Review #3, by XOdannieXO Chapter One

15th June 2015:
It's an amazing first chapter. Truly! I have never read a story which had Roxanne's POV as their focus - or one of their focuses. But I definitely liked it. + the names you made up, 'WitchWonder' and 'Fizbang Fiasco'? Awesome. And I like the name Nashira. Correct me if I'm wrong but, Indian? Anyways, well done

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the lovely review! I definitely have been enjoying writing Roxanne, just because I feel like she would be an interesting mix of George and Angelina and I wanted to experiment with her character a bit. Alas, I cannot claim credit for the Witch Wonder bit, as it is referenced very briefly in the fifth book I think? (Except apparently I actually got it wrong and it is supposed to be Wonder Witch. Oops...). I actually had chosen the name Nashira kind of randomly (although I will eventually mention the reason behind it in later chapters). I wasn't sure if it was too obscure, so I'm glad you like it :) I'm attached to it now at least haha. Thanks again for taking the time to review (also, I just saw that you left another review as well because you are amazing, so I'm going to go ramble at you for a while there).

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Review #4, by Chivalrous Chapter One

11th June 2015:
Hi!

I absolutely love this story!

Your characters are so wonderful and realistic! Roxanne as a Hufflepuff? I never would have written that myself, but it works so well for this story. Nashira is very cool and I love her being a Slytherin! I have a special place in my heart for Slytherins.

We didn't get to see a lot of the plot, but I'm excited to see where it leads!

I love the premise and how you've set the story up, it makes me so excited to read the rest of the story!

I hope you post soon, because I adore this!

Sincerely,
Ireland

Author's Response: Ah such a lovely review! First off, thank you so much for taking the time to respond, it really means a lot. I am so so glad that you like it so far! I actually have the first few chapters written from before (they are only in need of massive editing), so I can promise quick updates for a while! Funnily enough, the pacing was one of my major problems when I first started writing it, and I definitely noticed that I would include a lot of irrelevant tangents or scenes that I am trying to cut down. I suspect that I still will have some problems with it, but hopefully I will improve somewhat. Seriously though, thanks again for the review! It really did make my day :)

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Review #5, by Ann_ Granger  Chapter One

10th June 2015:
This is really good. I love your description of Fred and James.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review, I'm really glad you like it so far!! I am definitely having a ton of fun writing James and Fred. Thanks again for taking a moment to respond, I really appreciate it!

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Review #6, by pottered  Chapter One

8th June 2015:
hi hi hi
I really liked this, it was so funny and refreshing, to be honest.
the pranks were funny as well and I loveddd nashira and roxanne c:
xx

Author's Response: Thank you so much pottered for the kind review! It was much appreciated and made my day :)

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