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Review #1, by Arwen My Love, My Life

21st August 2003:
nice, i like it, but it wouldn\'t happen, a remus/hermione, but i suppose its totally up to an amagination, which, rest asure i have a lot of. I REALLY LIKE IT AND YOU HAVE TO WRITE MORE, AND SOON. LITTLE TIP: ONCE YOU GOT A BIT OF DIALOG PUT EACH SENTECE FROM A DIFFRENT PERSON ON A DIFFRENT LINBE LIKE, E.G: \"LOOK hARRY, ITS A MULTI COLOURED FLYING SAUCER,\" \" DON\'T BE SILLY RON, ITS A DRAGON.\" THAT REALLY SHOULD BE \"LOOK HARRY, ITS A MULTI COLOURED FLYING SAUCER,\" \"DON\'T BE SILLY RON, ITS A DRAGON,\" GOOD ALL THE SAME, Arwen

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