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Review #1, by angel_speaks Dreams of Hope

12th December 2012:
I really like this story! It really has that mellow flow to it, I guess it was because of the way you described the beach scenery and how Harry had presented his gift to Hermione :) I think that would have to be my favorite part!

Nw as I have mentioned your description of the scenes in the story are really good. There are few grammatical mistakes here and there but nothing too alarming. The way you wrote in the characters seems pretty accurate as well as the flow of the story. Overall, I think you did a pretty good job with this one ^_^

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Author's Response: Thank you very much, for your review. As far as the mistakes, I'll try to improve my skills, and if possible (If time permits) I'll rectify my mistakes in this story.
Thank you very much,
Blazing Golden Pheonix.


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Review #2, by Siriusly Love Sirius Dreams of Hope

10th December 2012:
That was so CUTE! Such a beautiful little story :') Even though I felt that Hermione and Harry were a bit out of character, I thought that it still worked nicely, plus I'm a sucker for a cute story like this! I love how the present worked its way into real life :)

Godd job, and good luck!

~Siriusly (from the surprise gift challenge)

Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review. Really sorry for the late in response. I was away from home all these days.

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