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Review #1, by BKL8008 And He Didn't Live Happily Ever After

27th November 2012:
It's touching, and I've often watched the Pensieve bits (the best thing about it) from that awful DH2 film. This reminds me much of that. I don't think you need the "I" and "II" and "III" stuff though. I think it flows well enough without those. Touching. I liked the part with the wedding. I can see Snape doing this.

Author's Response: Thanks so much, I was wondering if the flow could do with or without it. I'm having a beta look over this as well so I'm just waiting for it to get back to me! Thanks for your review!

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