I just had to scroll down and write this immediately: I LOVE the reference to Merlin! Report Review
Loving it!!! Please post more chapters soon! I'm really enjoying it and I love the characters! Obviously the Doctor is the Doctor but I think you are capturing his personality in your own way (if that makes sense). Report Review
I've never really been into Doctor Who, that was always more my sister's thing, but I'm now intrigued. I might go watch some more Doctor Who.Author's Response: Watch Doctor Who. DO IT YOU WILL NEVER REGRET IT Report Review
UGH THIS WAS SO GOOD!
I really want to read on but I don't know if I can deal with anymore Doctor Who-related heartbreak...Author's Response: I PROMISE THERE WILL BE NO HEARTBREAK JUST KEEP READING
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Shame on you for leaving a cliffy! I want more!
Also, your writing style behind the dialog is fantastic! I've always loved looking into the way writers such as your self approach that part of the story, as silly as it sounds… but it is probably one of the most important parts of any book or story and you do it so wonderfully! Not that the rest of it isn't good! It's perfect too but when your characters talk, they actually talk. Their voices don't just blend into into each others, no, each character has their own unique voice! And I love it! And I don't say that often! I'm very picky about voices…
Now look at that, I'm becoming overly dramatic! For shame, really, I blame it all on you...Author's Response: Huh, that is a bit of a cliffy, isn't it? I apologise, I didn't even realise I was doing it :P It just seemed like a good place to end the chapter.
Thank you! I've had a number of comments along those lines about my dialogue, and it really is flattering to think my writing reflects reality. I find dialogue to be really important to develop characters and the relationships between them. And, of course, it always helps to hear Matt Smith's Doctor in my head when I write his lines :P
Thanks so much for the review and I hope to see you back for chapter 3! Report Review
Ee! More please! I need more of the Doctor! You write him so accurately I love it!Author's Response: Thank you so much! Update will be pretty soon, I've got the next chapter written :) Report Review
I was going to pass this story up as it only had one chapter but then I realised it was you writing it (I stalk your works) and I really wasn't dissapointed...love it!Author's Response: Wow, that means a lot to me! Thanks so much for reading even though there's only one chapter - but I promise updates will be quick, so I won't keep you waiting long! Report Review
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