Hey Madi, Team Blue for the win!

You really caught the arrogant and superior air I would have thought Draco would have at the age of ten. It was really funny to read, because he changes so much throughout the course of Hogwarts. I suppose he hasn’t matured yet so that’s the reason for it.

He really believed that his family was superior to other ones and it was those little comments such as if you didn’t know his name you must be a muggleborn and that his father’s friends with all these high up people.

The activities he was going to do such as play quidditch or go to Florean’s for ice cream really fitted him and reflected his age. Not many people remember to do that and have him off chasing girls, I know Malfoy is a bit of player but I don’t think he would have started that young :P Also his remarks about Blaise and Pansy were really cute and appropriate for that age!

I have two CC’s for you. Sometimes you slipped out of the formal language you would expect from Malfoy such as saying ‘mum’ instead of ‘mother’ and ‘mate’ instead of ‘friend’. It’s quite easy to do that, but easy to fix too. Also the spacing between the chapters were a little on the large side, so you may want to think about reducing them.

Overall I thought this was a great insight into the mind of child Draco :D

-Kiana

Author's Response: Oh thank you! I'll have to take a look and fix a few things, as I haven't put anything new up for this since new year's eve D:

I was worried that I wouldn't capture his character correctly, but I'm glad you think I did! When you're eleven, the main focus of your life is friends, family, and fun. You don't worry about girls and stuff like that because you don't have the maturity nor the hormones and all of the lovely things like that that go along with it.

I'm hoping to end this around their third year as a sort of lead-in or prequel to Love Makes Me. Or just end it however I see fit. :)

Thanks for the lovely review! :) xx
~MadiMalfoy

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i think this is going to be very interesting! I love this story as its only focusing on Draco! But i would just suggest u to keep on writing short chapters and moving things a little faster,,,(i don't write stories but u can take my advice :) )

Author's Response: Yes this is kind of like my second baby (LMM is my first) and I know how long it's going to last and to what year it's going to end in but I just have to figure out the roadmap to get there first. Don't worry, something will be up within a month at the latest! :) xx
~MadiMalfoy

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Aw so cute! I defnitely think you should go on with the story! xx

Author's Response: Thank you! I haven't had time to write anything for about a week so there should be something up soon...eventually. :) Thanks for the review! xx
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hey! wow!
that was really very nice! u write so well!!! i wish i could write lyk u . well i will soon read love makes me.nd reveiw. :D
dramione rockz,
shinichi

Author's Response: Thanks shinichi! I'm kind of waiting on this one until I get more of Love Makes Me up since I'm kind of on a writing spree with that. Thanks for the review! xx
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hey madimalfoyy.,
that's gr8 that ur writitng another storyyy .
welll i really really liked this chapter...its just like draco writng it himself in real.u wrote it so welll.hmmm.really nice. :)



nd does it have dramoine? well he is just 10 yrs old now...hahahha.just a bloody ten yr old.but still im waiting for dramoine in the coming chaptersss.


do update soon.nd love makes me is goin on really well :)

till then bye
B-)

Author's Response: Thank you! Once I have the next chapter of LMM up, I'll post the next one of this! It might have Dramione--I have it as an option right now, but it may or may not work out. Thanks for your lovely reviews! :)
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Wow cant believe your writting another story, i hope it turns out to be a dramione story because there my faviourite, but i dont mind because its about draco!! Anyway i cant wait to find out what you have planned for this book, but i dont think it'll be like your other book but it will be as equally amazing.
P.s. loved the fact you made him into a little artist because... im love art and im doing it for my GCSE's.
P.s.s. please update both of your books soon.

Author's Response: Thank you! This is just a little side story that I decided to write, and it could potentially be Dramione, but I'm not sure where I want to go with it exactly. :)

I'm going to write a one-shot featuring Blaise and Pansy soon too, just to see if I like those kinds of stories or not, but Draco will be involved as well!

I love art too, that's why I made him a closet artist! I'm currently waiting for the next chapter of LMM to be validated, then I will put up another chapter of this--I'm going to go back and forth between the two until I finish this one :)

Thanks always for the reviews!
~MadiMalfoy

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Seems exactly like how the 10 year old Draco would sound and write :) please carry on writing! Would like to see how he 'grows up'!

Author's Response: Thank you! Next chapter to be up once the queue opens back up, a little bit of foreshadowing in it :) Go check out my other story as well, thanks again! :)
~MadiMalfoy

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