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Review #1, by Allilipsie

The Lines that Brought Them Together: Scorpius

28th April 2013:

Okayy. just to start off, not a bad story, in fact pretty interesting. I just keep getting confused every time you describe Lilieth/Nyx's hair in chp2 it was chestnut brown and chp5 it suddenly became raven black. There was also a slip up with Collette's hair, first it was blonde now it's brunette? Just something you might need to touch up on.

Author's Response: Oops, seriously didn't even notice lol!! I'll be sure to fix it. And thank you, constructive criticism is always good :))

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Review #2, by sillylion

The Line That Broke Them: Rose

15th January 2013:

Well. Another great chapter. I cant wait to see how Scorp and Rose continue on.. Also I was wondering how Al is going to be? I see him as a player or a loaner in every nextgen story and I was currious.. or will he be the first Advrage Al I see???

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Review #3, by sillylion

The Line That Defined Him: Scorpius

15th January 2013:

Well! interesting first chapter and I cant wait to see what the next one brings...

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Review #4, by BBWotter

The Line That Defined Him: Scorpius

5th December 2012:

This story is a story that really speaks to me :) I would love to see it follow through, please write on, I'm totally favouriting this story :D x

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