I'm so glad to see that someone else appreciates the Ron/Luna ship! I think it's positively adorable -- I wrote a Ron/Luna short story a while ago, from out of seemingly nowhere, and really enjoyed it. It's not an entirely unrealistic idea, really. And I'm so glad this one-shot caught my eye! This was a great little story, and so cute. It's almost plausible to think this might have happened, because there were definitely a few moments in the canon books themselves when it seemed like Ron might be a bit attracted to Luna. :3 You wrote their characters pretty well, too; the romance moved fast, but you know, I'm not bothered by it.
Really good job with this! Please keep writing -- you have lovely descriptions, and a really great mastering of grammar and spelling, which puts you eons ahead already. I enjoyed it very much!Author's Response: Thank you so much! I love getting review like this :3 This ship was a request from someone on a Facebook page I admin, so I thought I would try it for fun, and I ended up really liking it. It might be something to try in the future after I finished my Harmony story. But anyways, thank you for the review and I'm glad you liked this! :) Report Review
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