I really love this can't wait for the next one Report Review
I love the story line, however you really should use a spell check or have someone proof read the story for you. Wrong word usage, bad grammar and confusing sentence structure makes this very difficult to follow along with. Report Review
WOW I am blown away this whole mystery in the first chapter was amazing and I bit confusing but the second chapter explain some questions I had but now this chapter left me with more I can't wait for more please keep on writing I will be waiting for more. Report Review
Great story so far(: Report Review
It's a good story plot! However, you switch from future tense to past tense rapidly. Overall it was good:) Report Review
Wow I really like this story! Report Review
awww can;t wait for more! Report Review
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