Nice story. Her mom is really creepy…. But you have a talent for writing. Good job :)

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It was a good chapter looking forward to the next chapter hopefully you'll post before the holidays. Heres hopping :)

Author's Response: Yeah, the validation time is really short right now, so I'm trying to get some chapters in. I will be posting during the Holidays also. I don't have anything else to do and I'm looking forward to writing more of the story. Thanks so much for reviewing!

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Its a good story that keeps getting better and better as i read it. When she saw james on the ground she flew out of the stands to his side, if thats not love i dont know what it is :). I really like James he might be over confident but thats what makes him and deep down lily likes that about him. Awesome job on the story, looking forward to the next chapter :).

Author's Response: That's great! The next chapter should be up in a few days so you don't have to wait long. Thank you so much for reading and I'm really grateful for the feedback.

-LL321

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*lol* Did James seriously think that trick wouldn't backfire?

Looking forward to reading more!

Author's Response: Well, we all know how James can be. Not exactly the smartest boy when it comes to girls is he? Maybe it's just Lily specifically. Thanks so much for reviewing and I hope you keep reading!

-LL321

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I love it! Really good!

Author's Response: That's great! Thanks so much for reviewing and I hope that you continue to read my story!

-LL321

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This was a nice read. I admit, Alice certainly was quite annoying but still funny too. I guess it takes a small injury for a girl to drop her guard and show a compassionate side sometimes :) Very nice story.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing! I really do appreciate your feedback. This was the first one-shot that I've done so I'm hoping that there was enough story-line. Thank for reading!

-LL321

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