12 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Barbara Telling Andromeda/ Meeting Teddy

6th April 2017:
Your story is great - please keep writing.

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Review #2, by FriendofMolly Telling Andromeda/ Meeting Teddy

25th October 2015:
Flaming Phoenix,
I think it's brilliant to use Grimmauld Place as a refuge for those children who are orphaned. It will probably be best if Molly and Andromeda are the spearheads for it. Andromeda will need something more than tending Teddy. And Molly, she is a natural Mum, who'll have her last chick away.
Keep it going,
PS Watch your capitalization.

Author's Response: thanks will take that into consideration :)

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Review #3, by Bookmonkey Aftermath and Recollection

2nd July 2015:
The pacing and the situations described here fit with how things would happen. The description of what they had done all year, discussion of tentative plans etc. I also think you captured the essence of the characters as used by J.K. Rowling. Some minor capitalization and spacing errors, but otherwise well done. I enjoyed reading and I am looking forward to more, even if the updates are slow. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thanks for the support :)

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Review #4, by invisibaleman75 Tears and Future Plans

11th April 2015:
The story seams to be going great in the future you could always have the daily prophet be mean to Harry and claim he is cheating on Ginny when he really isn't

Author's Response: I think that plot twist is way overused

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Review #5, by mysuv1 Tears and Future Plans

7th March 2015:
Waiting for more Please Continue

Author's Response: sorry been having a rough time lately and had a really bad case of writers block

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Review #6, by jerryfs1 Aftermath and Recollection

28th July 2014:
good story so far short ans to the point but well writen

Author's Response: thanks that's really encouraging

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Review #7, by ANN Tears and Future Plans

26th January 2014:
Aabsolutely amazing! Please update soon!

Author's Response: I'm trying, just had a bad case of writer's block with the next chapter, I'm grateful for any suggestions on how to start it. I do have some future chapter's written that are based on major events

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Review #8, by ScoroseOTP Tears and Future Plans

8th December 2013:
Awww, Ginny! She's is wonderful at this point, absolutely, exactly what I always hoped she would be like.
I love it!

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it I've always struggled a bit with writing so that's very encouraging to hear

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Review #9, by ScoroseOTP Aftermath and Recollection

8th December 2013:
I do like this, your explanations and descriptions are great.
Love how Ron still needs food!
Wonderful starting chapter!

P.S. Thank you for favouriting my story, 'A Person's A Person No Matter How Small', it means a lot. Don't be afraid to drop a review in for me!

Author's Response: Thanks, I love yours too. I'm looking for a beta if your interested

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Review #10, by FriendofMolly Tears and Future Plans

20th March 2013:
Flaming Phoenix,
Chapter 2 was as good as if not better than chapter 1. There still were missing capitals. I suspect now that you've written these two, you might be able to slow a bit and double check it, or perhaps someone will volunteer to beta for you. It seemed that in chapter 1 The Head, Kingsley, and the Weasleys needed an immediate accounting of what the three teens had been doing for the last 9 months. Now that the tale has been told it's time to slow down and regroup. There is still, loads of work to do. There was one more area I question. You had both Harry and Ron mention that they hadn't had a good meal since the Wedding. The three did spend a month at Grimmauld Place and Kreacher made sure they had great meals and then when they arrived at Shell Cottage they had proper nourishment. Granted that while on the run meals were lean and not always present. I'm sure they were all very thin. But they had good meals since leaving the Burrow, just not many.

Author's Response: I know they were at grimmauld place but there were people watching the house and they didn't really have a good home cooked meal like they are use too

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Review #11, by FriendofMolly Aftermath and Recollection

20th March 2013:
A really good start to my favorite genre, AtB. The flow and content was excellent. Very canon like. If I have one complaint it would be the occasional lack of capitals on some names. Harry's in particular. I suspect it was more a typo, than lack of awareness and knowledge. I am anxious to read the rest. Bravo!

Author's Response: Thanks I'll try and correct the capitals, constructive criticism is welcome

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Review #12, by Yap Aftermath and Recollection

23rd November 2012:
Can't wait for the next chapter :)

Author's Response: I'm trying to get it up soon

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