I like this. It's really good. It's sad though =[Author's Response: Thanks! Sadness is some I'm quite good at writing, so I've been told.
- Jasmine Report Review
Oh how happy and yet heartbreaking at the same time! I loved how you told this first of all! I thought that this was an absolutely wonderful oneshot and just so well written! I loved the idea behind it all with Lily sharing the last dance at her wedding with her old friend and being able to make ammends with him. Though I felt her telling him that it basically could have been him with her was just so heartbreaking because of course now thats probably all he can think about is that (as you said many times at the end of the oneshot) it could have been him marrying her, kissing her, and making her happy. So now because of one stupid mistake it completely changed the course of their lives! I loved that James did that for her though, inviting Severus to their wedding, it was just so sweet and amazing! I would have thought that maybe James would have been mad at Severus for showing up but instead it was the other way around! I really enjoyed the oneshot and I didn't notice any errors! Great Job!
~Slytherinchica08~Author's Response: SNILY IS ALWAYS HEARTBREAKING!
Thank you for such an amazing review. As much as I loved what JK set up with these two it felt unfinished and there was no way lily wouldn't forgive him in the end so here is one of my headcanons on what could have happened. thanks for the review!
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