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Review #1, by Canadian_Hogwarts tick tock.

7th August 2013:
Wow, I really enjoyed that! I was trying to guess what the narrator was throughout the piece, and I actually thought it could be Lily's wand telling the story. Which would be pretty cool too! I thought the way you wrote this was really cool...a good combination of broad narrative and tiny details (I like the idea of the lily on her wedding ring). All in all, this was a really well written piece. I really liked it. Good work :)

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