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Review #1, by zealousVisionary The Longest Sorting.

11th July 2014:
House Cup 2014 Review

This was a unique idea, and I have never seen anything like it before. I was so curious about who it was going to be, so I really enjoyed this story a lot.

Your writing for this story was very good, and I thought the way you described the restlessness of the hall was very good- I almost felt like I was there myself! I really liked the Sorting Hat's thoughts on Fiona as well and how he ended up choosing Hufflepuff because of Helga Hufflepuff's willingness to take anyone.

Overall, I really enjoyed that story- you answered a question I had always wondered about. Great job!

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Review #2, by Hagrid21 The Longest Sorting.

16th June 2013:
This is a really clever, original idea for story. It's anybody's nightmare to have to be in front of such a large crowd and that has to be magnified when you're sitting in front of the entire school when you haven't been there for five minutes yet. It was really interesting how you showed how the Sorting Hat goes through its progression, and how it always tries to do what's best for the child's future. I hope Fiona gets what she wants in Hufflepuff.

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