Really good story. Raven sure seems like she's been through a lot.

I think it wouldn't be THAT bad for Raven in Slytherin because there are quite a few half-blood Slytherins, but there are hardly any Muggle-born Slytherins. I think the only reason the Slytherins would give her a hard time is because she is new and doesn't know anything about Hogwarts.

I also think the Gryffindors would all be mean to her when they hear about how mean she was to Harry, Ron and Hermione. I think she will despise Hermione for being Muggle-born, Harry for being some tragic hero, and Ron for being a blood-traitor. So basically they will become enemies.

Awesome job, keep writing!!!

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Very well done! You did a very good job describing everything! Your character was well descriped and introduced. I don't understand why she was so snid to Harry, Hermione and Ron. Maybe instead she could have tried to make friends but I also understand where you are coming from and that you want her to seem like she is made for Slytherin. Well done again!
Kitty Potter
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Author's Response: Thanks so much for being my first reviewer! I was a little worried if any of the descriptions were confusing, but you just reassured me! And don't worry, I did plan for Raven to eventually make peace with them.
~Amoris

Oh and btw, I visited your story. Nice job on it and look out for my review :)

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