please get chapter three written because i cant wait to read more of your writingAuthor's Response: It's nearly done! :D I'm really glad you liked it, hehe, hope you carry on reading :P x Report Review
This is amazing. You are an amazing writer, and to see that you love my story 'The life of Anni Powells' so much makes me so happy. This story is truly amazing, and I can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon!Author's Response: EEEP! Thankssomuch! You are so amazing, I love your story to bits and just asdfghjkl thaaanks!! Chapter three will, hopefully, be up soon, so keep your fingers crossed ;) xx Report Review
Ally is interesting. I'm curious to get to know her.Author's Response: I'm glad you find her interesting. More about her character and the way she deals with things, as well as her abandoning her reservations towards social contact will be revealed through out the story. I just hope you'll stick around long enough to get there! :D
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Um. I have a McGonagall complex. I am ridiculously jealous that she's being raised by her. Like...stupidly so. Haha. I like what you did here, I liked the back story. :) One thing I would say is to try and show me rather than tell me...does that make sense? Overall, good!Author's Response: Hey, I have a Fred II fetish, you have a McGonagall complex, who am I to judge? ;) So you don't think the back story is too dramatic or anything? And yeah I get you, I should stop waffling and get down to what's actually happening without thoroughly explaining it first right? I'm super happy you liked it :D
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Another great chapter, please update soon x
~Macy xAuthor's Response: Thanks!! I've nearly finished chapter 3, so I hope to see a review soon! ;) hehe. Your reviews really give me confidence in my story so thanks, Maybe you could check out Mistletoe and Extraordinary and tell me what you think? :D xx Report Review
please write more! this is amazing and it demands more!Author's Response: Asdfghjkl thaaanks >. < I'm writing don't worry. I'm just stressed about exams ugh. I've started the third chapter and I have the next few chapters mapped out in my head :)) xx Report Review
This is a really good start; It makes me wanna read more :) Please update soon!Author's Response: I'll try! ;) The second chapter is up now! :D Report Review
Add a new chapter now. I do not like to be kept waiting.
Nahh jokes, I really like this story as It is U N I Q U E so add a chapter pwease? Xox
~Macy xAuthor's Response: Haha, you scared me there for a sec! ;)
I'm working on it though! I'm already part-way through chapter 3, but my editor takes long, but she's supermegafoxyawesome so it's worth the wait. I'm really glad you like it, and I'm gonna try and get it up by the end of the week, I'll really try! ^.^
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This was good, and I LOVE stories about Elementals. Spacing was really weird and hard to read, but from what I can tell you're off to a great start. Update soon!
SimoneAuthor's Response: Hey second chapter is up! Is the spacing still weird do you think? Thanks for taking the time to update :)) xx Report Review
This is a really good idea, and a wonderful start! Although maybe you could include some spaces every so often so it's a little easier to read? Either way, I loved it and added to my favourites :DAuthor's Response: YAY FAVOURITES! And yeah, I know what you mean about the favourites :) I'll get onto it ASAP :)) Thanks so much for the review!
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Oooh, intrigue! I love your interesting twist with the elemental magic. I also like that you take the time to describe the setting and whatnot--that's something I never seem to have the patience for when I'm writing, and reading this just made me realize that I realy need to work on that, haha. Can't wait to read more :)Author's Response: AWH! Thanks so much for this :) It's taking a while for me to get the story going, but I'm trying!! :D I'll update as soon as I can :D Report Review
hey! i really enjoyed reading the beginning of your story! please keep on writhing, because im hook already hahah :D but please do keep on add to the story :) xoxoxoAuthor's Response: Awh! Thank you! I'll keep on writing, omg you wrote writhing, hahahha, sorry okay yeah thanks :)) xx Report Review
Really like the idea for this story!! Ally is great!Author's Response: Thank you! :D I truly appreciate it!
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Well dear. Good Job. All I have to say is there was no grade under DADA. Oh and I think the word you would rather have is comely or home like (Homely means ugly actually) But otherwise Lovely job and I hope to see more!
LLGAuthor's Response: Oh my goodness thank you! This truly made my day, but unfortunately tragedy has struck! :( I wrote three more chapters for this and they all got deleted somehow so now I have to re-write them, which will unfortunately take me rather a long time, so don't expect anything new for a long time, and I'll go and change the mistakes right away.
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omfg it ez soo kewl!!111one!!!111
No, but seriously it's good. The writing is very paced but the poetic nature makes it a tad sentimental.
From,Author's Response: Okay, who is this? :P lol, siriusly :) Enkuku?
So I was thinking should it be done in third person or.? and I don't know where to go with this. Death Eater Rising or just typical teenage drama thing?
TELL ME WHO YOU ARE! hahah xoxo
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LOVE! Thank you for writing this. Seriously. Please don't ever stop.Author's Response: AW!! This is AMAZING for a first review! I'm not planning on stopping, hehe. So you don't think it's too detailed or a little strange with the Elemental magic and all? This actually made my day! I was SO scared that my story was going to be a total failure so. Thank you! :D
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