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Review #1, by JonJon Firewhiskey

24th March 2017:
I have to assume that you have never attempted to consume an entire bottle of whiskey since you talk of the protagonist Jane as having consumed TWO bottles of firewhiskey and then actually taking with other people inteligibly. From all indications in the canonical writings of JKR about the Potterverse, firewhiskey is at least a potent as real whiskey and unless witches and wizards have radically different biochemistry than muggles, 1 bottle consumed by a single person would leave them vomiting and black-out drunk and probably passed out and two bottles would put them in the hospital (or morgue) with alcohol poisoning. The lethal dose of alcohol is 5 to 8g/kg that is, for a 60kg person, 300g of alcohol can kill, which is equal to about 1 litre of spirits. If you want to make it more realistic you might change it something like 1/2 of a bottle that Jane consumes before she is stupid drunk.

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