I really loved the moments when Hermione & Draco were together & he was trying to say sorry, cute! I wasn't expecting Ron & Pansy, love the originality. I can't wait to read more, my fave of your stories, nice job! :DAuthor's Response: thnx alott! :D plzzz update ur 6th chapter soon oh plz do...LV is osom!!
thnxx again :D Report Review
loving this story already! Please update asap!Author's Response: thnxx! i'll try 2 update soon . :) Report Review
*moans lk a child* to short! ;D good job, anyways! I really like where this plot may be leading up to! ;) ur writing is very good!Author's Response: heyy!! thnxx alot dear!! !! the second chapter will be very long :) Report Review
again there were many mistakes. Many errors too but the plot was nice. I think that you wrote this story better than your other one.Author's Response: hmmm...well thnxx Report Review
hey its nice!
keep up the gud work.
regards, malpotfanAuthor's Response: hi malpot fan! thnx u wasted ur precious tym for reading my story well u can go nd study now :PPP hehehehee
well thnxx alot :)
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This is good! please write more. there's a very interesting plot and I can't wait to read the rest :DAuthor's Response: did u really like it??? omg!! thnxx alot!!! well actually im busy with my other stories so.well okay i will update very soon now :)
thnxx for reviewing ..ur review made my day.
welll you can also review for my new story- COMPLICATED CRUSHES. please do read it and tell me whther u liked it or not :)
nd u can check out my other stories too.
Thank you once again
shinichi Report Review
Hello there! You once reviewed my Dramione story Love Makes Me, so I decided to return the favor on one of yours! I have a few suggestions for you to improve your writing. Firstly, you spell Hermione with the "i" before the "o" (also in DramIone), but that was just something that bugged me minimally.
Also, I would strongly suggest getting a beta reader to correct and grammar or spelling errors, since some of your sentences didn't flow very well or sounded a little awkward.
Finally, make sure they sound in character--they don't really sound like they do in the books or movies, so if you changed that it would make it seem that much more believable.
I hope you only take this as constructive criticism and not offensively, I'm only trying to help! :) xxAuthor's Response: OMG! wow i reaaly really loved it! ur such a darling..no one ever suggested me such good things thnx alot..i will try 2 improve.. :)
uh yes...i know i am wrong in my spellings wid Hermione.one of my reviewers told me dat so i corrected my spellings in my other story- WRNGBTORW.i will soon correct my spellings in this chapter too.
hmmm..i am a young author ri8? hahaha im gonna make more mistakes..but i'll try not to make many...
well thnx again :)
ps- i found u in dark arts as well.u remember? Report Review
well u asked me to leave a review so i did..
i really liked your story alot...it was very funny nd i laughed nd laughed so much when i read it.could u update soon so that i could read it again..i want to read further
and please update the chapters of we are never getting back togther or are we plz soonAuthor's Response: oh really?? im so happy u liked it :)
well im busy in writin the chapters of we are never gettin back together or are we...so i cant update the second chapter of this story very soon..i hope u understand ok :)
wel yes im writing the 5tn chapter of WANGBTORW vry soon i will update it ok!
thnx for reviewin! Report Review
i really really loved the humor of your story,...,the diary part was so so much of funnn.really liked it.
well the charachter of draco,,,you have elaborated it i think ..he is so arrogant and osom!
And the deal part was great too.are Ron and Draco friends? i don't think they can be friends right? well the slap part was also good.
but i think that Hermoine blushed alot alot alot in this chapter but never mind .u really write gud humor .well i think i have told this before right?- in my previous review???
i will be waiting for the next chapter.as i think this is gonna be funny.
well i checked out the main pairs of this story.and i found rosius too? but how can they be a pair when draco is with hermoine? i think its something like that what im thinking now :)
nd yes i think this review is a little large but u told me too create aan account right? but im 11 years old and so i dont have a an email id..i will have to use my father's or mother's or whateva.
well i will try to make an account./
and yes this was a long chapter but i have read longer ones before too.dont mind but.
im no good writer but i can give u an advice that you can write longer chapters :)
and there are some errors too...so you could correct them.
I would surely read you other story- Never lose Hope. well i have alreday read WANGBTORW? isnt your story's name too big??? lol
10/10 for the chpt. liked it alot
your sincere reviewer,
dramoine is osomAuthor's Response: oh godd! such a big reveiw! this is my first such big one...thnku so so much man!.ur review made my day ! omg such a long one.k i will write longer chapters i promise u :P
hmmm..i liked to know this that i write gud humor.thnx.
i will try 2 figure out those errors :)
yeppp there is rosius too..you will find that out soon.but im not gonna update so soon coz mah xams r goin on so.u gottta wait . :(.
yes draco is arrogant and is osom!! i just luv draco alott.nd yeah i liked the diary part too :)heheheh
hm,thnxx for the 10/10 nd yeah WANGBTORW is a long name.hehehehehe its mah idea :) kk plz read never lose hope nd review too :P i louv redain my story's reviews. :D
No, Ron and draco are not frndzz.they just made a deal.actually in my story they just hate each other.well u will find out very soon why.
well thnxxx again love u ( as a reveiwer )
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It was amazing.
Loved it. keep going.Author's Response: awww... thnxx alot dear :))) Report Review
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