That was lovely. I really liked your characterisations, and Rowena's reaction to Godric's return was very well done.Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it and thank you for the review! :) Report Review
Hey! Perelandra here. So...back on December 21 I asked for 5 one-shots...and you were the 5th. I said I was to get to you within 48hrs...but it didn't happen. Holidays and such. I'm sorry! Up until now I've been busy with life, and my own story...but I'm here now! Ready to tackle your story!
First of all, just so you know, I love Founders fics. They don't get that much love or respect! So kudos to you for writing one!
The line that says 'They were sat in a clearing' ---It reads weird, perhaps you meant 'they were sitting...'. Or maybe 'They sat in a clearing...' to make it go with the rest of your sentence.
I really loved this! I usually read and review at the same time but your story managed to suck me right in! I just couldn't stop! I wanted to know if Godric was going to die or what! At first, when I began to read the last paragraph, I thought he had been a ghost to come see her just before his passing. I was getting ready for the reveal moment, that I should get some tissues for the tears of sadness...but it didn't happen. Actually came back to her! However, I wish you had expanded this just a bit more. Where did he go? What happened? Was it a war? Is this during Hogwarts? Before? So many questions! Hahaha!
I could feel the love she had for him, and the desperation she felt when he didn't come back after years. This story was cute, fantastic and just overall a great read! Grammar was spot on except for that bit of snag I told you about. The flow this story had was fantastic, by the way. I think that's what managed to suck me right in and wouldn't let me go until I got to the very end.
Thank you for letting me read this one-shot! :D
Until next time!
--RosieAuthor's Response: Hey, I'd completly forgotten about that so no worries and I love founders as well but I can't really write all four of the together!
Thanks for pointing that out, I've went back and altered it! :)
I'm glad you liked it! I was considering a sad ending but I prefer happy ending so ended up with one!
I'll see what I can do as too add more on, I'll have a re-read and add some more information.
Thank you so much, and thank you for reviewing! :) Report Review
Aw, I love Founders romance! This was such a sweet story and I loved that very last line about the blue sky meeting the red sunrise. Great work!Author's Response: Hey, thanks for the review and I'm glad you liked it! :) Report Review
Hi Shaza! Thank you so much for this! It's so precious, and I do love a Godric/Rowena story :)
I loved the dialogue you used in this; it felt very true to the time period. I especially loved Godric's line: "Time ceases to stop just because we will it so." I just thought that was gorgeous. Overall, this was so precious and touching, and I loved reading it. Thank you again! :)
--MaggieAuthor's Response: Hey there, I'm glad you liked it! :)
Yeah, not sure where the old language came from, maybe too much shakespeare!
Thanks for the review! :) Report Review
Hello! I'm here to review another story! I really, really loved this! You did an excellent job portraying the emotion in this story, and I thought it was really beautiful. I could picture both Rowena and Godric really clearly, and could tell how much they loved each other right from the beginning of the story. It was really sad when he had to leave her, and I felt bad for Rowena, but I love that she was faithful to him and waited for him every single day. And the ending was wonderful! I'm glad that he came back and they could be together again! This was really excellent, and I loved reading it! 10/10Author's Response: Hey there! :)
I'm glad you liked it and could see that they loved each it and could picture Rowena and Godric clearly, I don't do very good descriptions so this make me happy! :)
Thanks for the review and for being an amazing secret santa!! :D Report Review
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