Adorable! Also a little sad :( good job!
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That's so lovely!! I loved how you changed between Snape and Jame's point of view :) You did such a good job giving the different sides of the story while making the characters real :)
I do feel sorry for Snape but I love James/Lily Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it! I really felt like they had to switch POVs to fit the song and it turned out good, so I'm happy with it. Thanks you for reading and reviewing, each little one makes my day. Report Review
it was so sad yet happy it was brilliant thanks for the great storyAuthor's Response: Thanks, I'm really glad you liked it. Thanks for reading and for the lovely review! Report Review
That was so beautifully written. :O You did an amazing job with the parallels between James' and Severus' points of view, and your writing style is beautiful. Please keep writing, you've created one of my favorite stories in the fewest words.
~WaterLily :)Author's Response: Wow, thanks. This review really means a lot to me. I get all warm and fuzzy inside when my work touches someone like this, especially because I know what it feels like to read a story that just... stays with you forever. I hope my story was like this for you, I really liked writing it and I'm overjoyed that someone loves it enough to leave a review like you left. Thanks for reading and reviewing, and I'm so glad it was one of your favorite stories. Report Review
I really like the changing point of views! Great Story!Author's Response: Thanks. I don't know, I just always felt like that song really fit two different points of view. Maybe I'm just weird, but whatever. I'm happy you enjoyed it, thanks for reading and reviewing! Report Review
That was so cute its unbelievable. And I love how Lily finally isn't the perfect girl whose completely happy with her body and always confident. Makes her... More realAuthor's Response: :D Thanks. I liked making her have doubts, because she is, after a ll, a teenage girl. I don't like those those characters that are completely confident always because that's not real. I'm glad you liked it, thanks for the read and review! Report Review
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