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Review #1, by maraudertimes Unhealable

7th December 2013:

So I don't really know what to say, because although this was a really beautiful story, it hurt me. The bullying was really sad and Lily was so sweet and broken.

I was like Al, struggling to try and keep Lily happy and, at the end, alive.

This was really well written and I think really went well with the challenge. Good for you, it was amazing.

Amazing job!

Author's Response: Oh, hi there! Thanks so much for the sweet review, I'm flattered that you think so! :) ♥

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Review #2, by Cat Unhealable

8th July 2013: just amazing. I didnt know bullying had such a big affect on people, This is beautifully written and I was near tears during it. It has definately unspired me to write a story about a girl who gets bullied, Ill dedicate it to you if you like, pleaase write something in Lilys POV about it.

Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much! ♥

I guess I was enlightened, if that's the right word, a few years ago when a girl in my school was bullied to the extent that she committed suicide. It was... horrible. Obviously she had other problems going on as well. But I guess that's why I didn't want to undervalue its effects in this story.

That's so cool that I've inspired you to write your own story! I'd love to read it.

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Review #3, by bester_jester Unhealable

7th June 2013:
This is so heartbreaking, and just so spot-on with contemporary society.

I love everything about this story, it's so well written. I was on edge the whole time, and so angry with the bullies when Al was talking to them.
You had me believing that Lily was going to jump, and that Al wasn't going to stop her.

Mentions of her old smile, and her red hair were what I found the saddest. Bullying is disgusting and it ruins lives, and you've captured that so well.

Thanks for sharing an amazing story!

Author's Response: D'aw, it's sweet of you to review back!

Thank you so much! Glad to know I somehow captured bullying well! What a totally lovely and unexpected review :)

You awesome person, you ♥

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Review #4, by idkitstristan Unhealable

12th December 2012:
This is so good! Actually amazing :)

Author's Response: Aw thank you, I'm really glad you like it! :)

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Review #5, by DumbledoresArmyRocks Unhealable

5th November 2012:
That was SOOO sad for me! But so good! The chapter was really long, and I lobe longer chapters. You're a really good author!

Author's Response: It is sad isn't it! ...but I had the best weekend ever writing it ;) Who knew angst could be so enjoyable?

Not me, that is the answer.

Oh, personally I prefer shorter chapters, but I didn't look at the word count for this story. I just wrote and wrote until I felt it was completed and this is what I came up with ;D

Thanks so much for the lovely compliments! ♥

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