Hello there! You left me such a lovely review on Keep Calm and Carry On, and I really want to return the favor!
The title of this story is really cute and definitely one-of-a-kind. It certainly draws the reader in. Hahaha, I definitely snorted at "Oh. You noticed." I can tell right off that this is going to be a very funny read!
I like how you've characterized Remus here; it's different from many of the others that I've read! I think a lot of authors play up on him being the shy, sweet one but he would definitely need a snarky and rebellious streak to fit in with James and Sirius! I laughed at the way he portrayed himself in the story, with girls flocking to him even as a young kid :D
I also liked that you had something cliche happen, like your OC falling and landing on top of her crush, but then you turn it on its head by talking about how physically painful and embarrassing, and completely unattractive it all is in real life.
Cute first chapter! :)Author's Response: omg thank you so much you're the best! and this is such a crazy coincidence but i'm reviewing RIGHT NOW on the fourth chapter of Keep Calm and Carry On.
Like it's uncanny as to how that happened. i was reviewing when i realized i hadn't signed in, so then i went to my account and signed in, and then checked my reviews and saw this.
Anyway, YOU REALLY ARE THE BEST LIKE I CAN'T EVEN. This is actually a one-shot companion piece to my other main story, Storm in a Teacup.
thank you so much once again for reading and reviewing and your review was so lovely, really(: Report Review
liike the story :D but when did u post this? Report Review
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