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Review #1, by Gaius Scipio Prologue

31st October 2012:
I really enjoyed this chapter; the dialogue was well written and I also like the idea of exploring the horcruxes from another angle. I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter. Oh just one thing in your summary at the end you have "A world he may not make it out alive of." I imagine you meant to write "A world he may not make it out of alive"

Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback, glad you liked it!
Yeah, that last line I kept thinking there had to be a better way to word it. Hopefully you enjoy the next chapter.


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