Oh my god! This seems like such an interesting story and I cant wait to read more! I just listened to the podcast of the first chapter of it, and was very intrigued and so came to read further, and it was a decision I don't regret.
This seems like a great piece. I really like your writing style. The brief chapters are a torture though and I am so intrigued as to where the story is headed.
Your plot seems to be great though, and I love the concept. Poor Hermione, Ron, and Rose, though. I feel so bad for them. And Hermione is pregnant too, so I hope she doesn't get into any trouble!
So, the tree is a gravestone huh? Is it a ghost or something that's going to come after them, then?
Well, I am really intrigued so I do hope you update soon. This is a great story, so please keep writing!
P.S. I am aware I gushed and rambled a lot, so my apologies. I dont usually do that unless its an awesome story and I cant wait to read further xD Report Review
Hm interesting... I am very curious who "she" is and why she's hunting that poor little Rose! Well written, keep up the good work ;)Author's Response: You won't find out who 'she' is for a while, but I hope you won't be upset when you do! :) Report Review
Okay, now I'm really intrigued :'D
Argh she should just use Legilimency, it's for a good cause... but I understand why she won't :P
But jeesh, this is getting creeepy. And I like it :)Author's Response: Thanks! It's about to get a whole lot creepier... :) Report Review
Ooh I'm really interested to see what 'it' is! And I'm glad Rose finally said something different, that's kind of promising I think. You write really well, I felt all tense while reading it haha :)Author's Response: Thanks! I guess I've established mood! :) You'll love the next chapter. Hermione discovers something really important! Report Review
Oh my, this is very intriguing. I saw your help posting on the forum and thought I'd check it out. Hmm... What's coming? A mystery, indeed.
There are many possibilities.
I really like your first chapter and I'm so glad that she said something else and gave a clue to her mother. There is hope for Rosie's recovery yet.
Dark WhisperAuthor's Response: Thanks! What's coming is a mystery to me too! :) I've had to do quite a bit of thinking, but I'm almost done with a plot map. Thanks a lot for the review! Report Review
I'm intrigued. Big time. I honestly can't wait to see "what's coming", and what happened, and how Rose came to be like that. So update soon! I'm dying to know :DAuthor's Response: Thanks! The next chapter will be up really soon! :) Report Review
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