Yay! That was amazing!!! Really Report Review
I love this idea that Lily and James are stuck together! Maybe you should have James help her out, and be really nice to her. Then she would change her attitude towards her. Report Review
Errrmmm... Okay Quite a funny story! Report Review
i follow you on instagram and saw your post about this, i do like it and some constructive criticism, maybe add more description inbetween dialogue but if not it's still great. looking forward to upcoming chaptersAuthor's Response: thank you lucy, let me know on my account who you are? that was one thing i didn't like about this chapter- having most dialogue but i often have trouble finding the balance but i am working on that. i've written the next chapter and there is more description especially because i introduce new characters, etc thank you for your review xoxo Report Review
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