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Review #1, by WoodenFences Chapter 2

25th February 2013:
Yay! That was amazing!!! Really

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Review #2, by jamesandlily_forever Chapter 2

2nd January 2013:
I love this idea that Lily and James are stuck together! Maybe you should have James help her out, and be really nice to her. Then she would change her attitude towards her.

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Review #3, by Heehee Green hair

2nd November 2012:
Errrmmm... Okay
Quite a funny story!

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Review #4, by Lucy Green hair

1st November 2012:
i follow you on instagram and saw your post about this, i do like it and some constructive criticism, maybe add more description inbetween dialogue but if not it's still great. looking forward to upcoming chapters

Author's Response: thank you lucy, let me know on my account who you are? that was one thing i didn't like about this chapter- having most dialogue but i often have trouble finding the balance but i am working on that. i've written the next chapter and there is more description especially because i introduce new characters, etc
thank you for your review xoxo


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