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Review #1, by Katty1234 The Garden

24th March 2013:
YOU CANT LEAVE US HANGING LIKE THIS! I CANT STAND THE SUSPENCE! I HAVE ABSOLUTLY NO IDEA WHATS GOING ON AND I LIKE THAT, BUT YOU COULD HAVE GIVEN US A LITTLE MORE TO GO ON!

Author's Response: Wow, I thought this was pretty self explanatory. If you have no idea what's going on, perhaps read it again? O.o

~Zyii


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Review #2, by miss_lestrangexoxo The Garden

2nd March 2013:
The last chapters took a wild turn of events, but i loved it. I do wish you should have wrote it longer with more detail though! Make more problems that went between them, maybe make them question why they had a connection, and show the changes in hermiones mindset. one second she hated him, one second she was begging to be near him. also, i would have loved if the ending was told from harry and ron on earth, and if you explained how they died. Constructive critizism! the story line was amazing though:)

Author's Response: It was a short story, I planned it as 5 chapters, it wasn't supposed to make total sense, it was supposed to be misjointed in places. It whole point of her hating him then begging to be near him was that things don't work out in a structured way because it is not reality, they're dead.

It was really just a cloud of a story I had in my head which I decided to transform into a barely good story.

Thanks for the constructive critizism tho.

~Zyii


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Review #3, by Nikki The Hosptial

4th November 2012:
Are they ghosts? Or are they in a heaven that looks like Hogwarts?

And you write amazing stories btw! Love reading them :)

Author's Response: They're in heaven, or a between room between dying and heaven I guess.

And thanks that means a lot. I'm glad that you like my stories :) ~ Zyii


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Review #4, by cyan dreams The Village

1st November 2012:
I'm in America can I have a cookie please *puppy dog eyes*

Author's Response: But you haven't guessed when Draco and Hermione are ;o I'll give you half a cookie instead

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