Crying. This is wonderful.

Author's Response: thank you, this means so much to me :)

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That was very powerful - I shed a few tears. I'm sorry for your loss, however you should be proud of your wonderful tribute story. Well done.

Author's Response: Thank you this story means a lot to me. I can't say how much it means to me that people like this :)

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This is really great. I especially love the first section (really made me think!) and how it flows so seamlessly into Sirius's section. Very well done :)

I can't help but notice how the summary quote should be 'death is but the next great adventure'? Unless you changed it on purpose... in that case just ignore me, ahha.

Author's Response: thank you for your review!
Even though this was such a depressing, sad story, it was nice to write it. I enjoyed the first part of the story a lot as well.
Thank you for pointing that out! I will fix it!
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I really loved this. It was really raw, bare emotion, like an open wound. Well done, i loved the ending as well, very dramatic. Only thing is in one-shots i love using short 'one-liners' but just be sure not to over use them because sometimes it can make reading a little harder. But great job, really likes this. Ohh and i loved the title, i thoughthat was quite inspired :)

Author's Response: thank you for your review! I do admit sometimes to use to many one liners. I wrote this fanfic very quickly, and it kind of just flowed so i left it. It means a lot to me, this story, as it was based on a loss in my family.
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