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Review #1, by WishfulMuggle Before the Dawn

6th January 2013:
Oh wow.this is good:) I wasn't expecting the Weasleys to come into the story...and sweet baby Ron...how precious!

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Review #2, by Faith100z Before the Dawn

5th November 2012:
Awww this was too cute! Little Harry and little Ron just seem like the cutest things ever! :)

I really loved the way you wrote Mrs. Weasley, I love the way she was characterized. It was really realistic and true to the character we see in the books.

I thought the flow was good and I didn't see any grammar or spelling mistakes. This was really well done, great job!

- F

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Review #3, by HipogriffDancer Before the Dawn

2nd November 2012:
Through the whole thing I had tears in my eyes, I think knowing what was going to happen that he wouldn't even go to Sirius who would love him but the Dursleys who basically used him as a servant made it all the more sad.
I love the way you've done Lily's thoughts because they were exactly how I thought she would think and you made her character really strong.
I love James/Lily so much so it was nice to have their pair from you (because you're just really amazing at writing)! But I am still waiting for War of the exes and sleepless! ;) xxx

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Review #4, by potterfan310 Before the Dawn

1st November 2012:
My 200th review!!!

N'aww this is so sweet!
I love how you put Molly and Weasley kids in it :D

"Instead of giving Harry the sex talk, hed slip him a Playwizard" - Lol, deffinatly sounds like something Sirius would do :D

I think you characterised James, Lily, Molly really well.

Defo adding it to my favourites.
10/10
-Potterfan310
Soph xxx

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