Reading Reviews for Before the Dawn
4 Reviews Found

Review #1, by WishfulMuggle Before the Dawn

6th January 2013:
Oh wow.this is good:) I wasn't expecting the Weasleys to come into the story...and sweet baby precious!

 Report Review

Review #2, by Faith100z Before the Dawn

5th November 2012:
Awww this was too cute! Little Harry and little Ron just seem like the cutest things ever! :)

I really loved the way you wrote Mrs. Weasley, I love the way she was characterized. It was really realistic and true to the character we see in the books.

I thought the flow was good and I didn't see any grammar or spelling mistakes. This was really well done, great job!

- F

 Report Review

Review #3, by HipogriffDancer Before the Dawn

2nd November 2012:
Through the whole thing I had tears in my eyes, I think knowing what was going to happen that he wouldn't even go to Sirius who would love him but the Dursleys who basically used him as a servant made it all the more sad.
I love the way you've done Lily's thoughts because they were exactly how I thought she would think and you made her character really strong.
I love James/Lily so much so it was nice to have their pair from you (because you're just really amazing at writing)! But I am still waiting for War of the exes and sleepless! ;) xxx

 Report Review

Review #4, by potterfan310 Before the Dawn

1st November 2012:
My 200th review!!!

N'aww this is so sweet!
I love how you put Molly and Weasley kids in it :D

"Instead of giving Harry the sex talk, hed slip him a Playwizard" - Lol, deffinatly sounds like something Sirius would do :D

I think you characterised James, Lily, Molly really well.

Defo adding it to my favourites.
Soph xxx

 Report Review
If this is your story and you wish to respond to reviews, please login