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Review #1, by Melody Of Spit Wads, Cow Snogging and Awkward Catastophes

9th April 2013:
Write more! I found that I could really relate to it, so I rather enjoyed it.

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Review #2, by AlexFan Of Spit Wads, Cow Snogging and Awkward Catastophes

2nd November 2012:
The one thing that I can't get past is in the end where James goes "lol". Who says lol in really life? I have never heard anybody say lol in real life. I just can't get past that.

There's a just a few grammatical mistakes but other than that (and the lol) it's good.

Author's Response: oh.LOL. I say Lol in real life :P maybe that's just because im a teenager. thanks for reading!

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Review #3, by LittleLionGirl Of Spit Wads, Cow Snogging and Awkward Catastophes

30th October 2012:
Wow. Great first chapter. Lack of comments is seriously supprizing- this is an amazing beginning! I like the reality of this- and I agree everyone can be be a tad predictable... Cant wait to see how this goes :)
XOXOXOX,
LLG

Author's Response: aww thank you so much! Your so sweet to me

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Review #4, by cameron Of Spit Wads, Cow Snogging and Awkward Catastophes

30th October 2012:
haha sophie that authors note was rambling! :P I'm a sucker for a movie story though :D this is really good though! its so cool, i was so shocked when I saw your name at the top of the story though!

Author's Response: aww haha, thanks cameron :D I couldnt give up on hpff all together after I gave up on life love and berries, so im starting a new whole story again! *guilty face* Yeah I rambled quite a lot actually...*blushes*. didnt expect anyone I knew to read it! you mean on the banner? yeah I made the banner for the first time ever! :D

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