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Review #1, by The Claw of Raven Mornings

29th October 2012:
I quite like this. Very excellent character development. James and Tyler, in particular, are well portrayed. One thing to watch: be consistent with tense. I find it difficult to read when you keep switching between past and present tense (sometimes even within the same sentence). Pick one and stick to it!

Hope to see another chapter soon!

Author's Response: That's something I've noticed and I'm working on fixing it.

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