That was an excellent story. Very sad to. I like how you make it seem like Ginny blames Harry for everything even though it's not his fault.Author's Response: Thank you :)
Nothing is Harry's fault, of course! But I just always had a feeling that Ginny, who is such a firey, passionate person, I always thought that Fred's death would hit her really hard, so she would be left seething, looking for someone to blame :)
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This. Is. Gorgeous.
Oh my goodness, this is so beautiful! You're an amazing writer. It's really refreshing to see a piece where Harry is blamed for the deaths, especially by Ginny.
And the bit about Ginny's heart being a kingdom in ruins? Absolutely heartbreaking! That part in particular was just fantastic, I thought.
You're a wonderful writer, this was brilliant! Happy holidays ;)
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Like seriously, nicest reviewer every award goes to you, no contest :)
HAPPY HOLIDAYS TO YOU TO :D
And thank you so much, again, because really, this review right here is the best Secret Santa gift I could have ever wished for :D Report Review
This is a really interesting take to Ginny in DH. It's a lot different from the way she is normally portrayed, at least in my experience. I've seen (and written) stories where Harry blames himself for all the deaths and trouble caused by the battle, but I don't think that I've ever seen one where Ginny blames him. It kind of caught me off guard and made me a bit sad :(
I can see it, though. Ginny is a very passionate person who feels things deeply. She was really hurt by Harry leaving and now she has lost her brother. I'm glad that by the end, she admits to herself how much she does care about Harry and how much she still wants to be with him.
As a songfic, I think you did a good job. The sections between lyrics are a nice length, and the song fits with the story well.Author's Response: I'm sorry for making you sad! This story just kind of strolled into my head, and the idea of an angsty, angry Ginny really appealed to me!
And thank you :) It was my first attempt at a song-fic, so I'm glad you liked it :) Report Review
Great one shot :D You've done Ginny's emotional side perfectly and plus its a Harry/Ginny fic so its bound to be good :D 10/10 from me :DAuthor's Response: Thank you so much :D I know! Harry/Ginny is my all time favourite ship! It was the most angsty thing I had ever written, so I was a bit worried I'd gone overboard, but your lovely review has reassured me :) Thank you so much :D Report Review
I think it went great :)
I heart Ginny's emotional trajectory and character development. There is something accusatory and intense, which somehow does sort of fit into her character. At least the darker side of her. I've not come across many Ginny stories which depict so much anger, so this is a unique and fresh take on her character.
I especially love that you end the story at that moment.which is when the Death Eaters and Voldemort parade Harry's body around. This is a fantastic moment to conclude, and you couldn't have chosen better.
Another thing I particularly liked was the references to her relationship with Fred. Ginny's always been close to the twins, and your story did their relationship justice.
Thanks for writing this. Great work.Author's Response: Thank you so much!!! :) Your review has just made my day! To be honest, I usually depict Ginny as a rather happy character, but before I wrote this I heard Adele's song Turning Tables, at the same time as I was reading the DH, and this story just kind of fell into place! Thank you for reading :) Report Review
this is good :) I love the way you have done it allAuthor's Response: Thank you :) It was my first attempt at a song-fic, and I think it went ok! Thank you for reviewing :) Report Review
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