This was so beautiful :'(Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, I cried while writing it. Report Review
This is absolutely beautiful! Just fantastic! You have captured their relationship perfectly, xxAuthor's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you think I captured the relationship perfectly, but there are so many different interpretations. Thank you for reading! :) Report Review
Oh my God..I just loved this. It was so depressing and I was just so miserable. This bought tears to my eyes, goosebumps on my arms, and a chill down my back. I just love it. See what you did now? You got me devastated :'( Now I feel like crying again. Poor James and Lily! Author's Response: Thank you! As horrible as this sound, I'm glad it made you miserable. That actually means a lot to me. But I was also in tears. Jily is just so heartbreaking but perfect. Report Review
So beautiful...brought tears...just wonderfulAuthor's Response: Thank you! You're not alone in the tears my friend :,( Report Review
This is so ironic that I'm reading this, because I literally just watched this music video like a million times. It's heartbreaking isn't it? I don't know but it's just so powerful. Maybe because I've seen that type of thing before...anyways, I really like that you didn't make it about drug abuse like how it is in the video. I think it's a really interesting/cool perspective that your connecting it to Voldemort coming to kill them and James/Lilly seeing just how much they love and need each other.
It's intriguing and a really powerful one-shot. Also, I love the part where she says, "It's okay. You are so loved Harry. Mama loves you. Dada loves you." This story breaks my heart but in the best way possible.
You have a gift for writing, don't lose it! I know you've mentioned in your author's notes that your a senior (so am I)...are you planning on majoring in creative writing or journalism? (that's what I want to major in, journalism) If so, you should definitely look at submitting some of your works...they're really good! Okay, I'll stop being a creep now xDAuthor's Response: I haven't watched the video actually, I saw the narration of the video on a fandom video for something and it just stuck in my head. It's such a strong narration. Yeah, this is not in anyway a thing about drugs. More of the love that James and Lily shared (and baby Harry!)
I'm glad that you seemed to like it! This may sound bad, but you have no idea how happy I am to break your heart. That's one of the biggest compliments you can give a writer!
Thank you! Yes, I am a senior this year! 2013 all the way! I'm not planning on majoring in Creative Writing, but in Hospitality Management instead (International, depending on which school I end up at). However, I've been considering getting a minor in something and Creative Writing is up there!
Don't worry about being a creep, the best of us are ;) Report Review
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