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Review #1, by iatevoldysnose Fourteen isn't too young to learn how to kiss, is it?

19th May 2013:
Aww this was really sweet! I'm going to read the other oneshot too!

Well done!

-iatevoldysnose xox

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Review #2, by ines0803 Fourteen isn't too young to learn how to kiss, is it?

10th March 2013:
Hi!
I like this one-shot. It was really short, but it was nice. Vanessa is cute with her insecurities. And I agree that kissing your best friend can only lead to trouble! Fortunately, we already know that it will all be fine in the end :) I'm glad that you made a part 2!
I'm going to read it now :)
Ines

Author's Response: Hi!
I'm glad you liked it! I know it was shorter than I was expecting it to be but they'll get longer, I promise!
Hopefully you like the next one as well. Thank you for reviewing, review make me happy :D

MrsRonaldWeasley263


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Review #3, by TimeSeer Fourteen isn't too young to learn how to kiss, is it?

30th October 2012:
I love this story! It is so cute and if you can I think you should make it more of a story (even if it is a short one).

Author's Response: Thank you :) I might do a series of one-shots about them over the years, but I'm not sure. I think it just depends on how I want the story to go. Who knows, maybe I'll make it a little novella.
Thanks for the review!


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Review #4, by hpsauce Fourteen isn't too young to learn how to kiss, is it?

25th October 2012:
That's so sweet. I like the way it pans out in the end and just how it is.
I think, obviously if you have time, it'll be nice f you could turn it into something more maybe... :D
Thanks for writing
hpsauce

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! Haha. I'm glad it was well recieved, and I might make it into a short series of one-shots or a small novella :)

MrsRonaldWeasley262


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Review #5, by SilverRoses Fourteen isn't too young to learn how to kiss, is it?

25th October 2012:
IT'S SO FREAKING CUTE! I am so glad I decided to read it while looking through the archives, otherwise...well, look what I would have missed out on! ;)

Plus, having it written in the first person made it that much better, because this sort of thing written from third person is always a bit lacking.

And I can't forget to add that I'm SO glad they ended up together in the end, because it would have been so disappointing to have it any other way :) LOVE your style so much! And you should definitely seriously consider making it into a full story, or making a full story that goes after it, it would be really good.

Anyhow...yeah...I love stories like this: how others imagine some couples getting together, even if one character is an OC, so it's just my type of story and you did it SO well! It's adorable how they were both kind of like 'awkward' at the first part, and then they both liked it :) It's just all over awesome!

Author's Response: Oh wow, thank you so much! I love hearing that people like my stories :)

I think if I do continue the story it will be in thier Seventh year, and it will be very different than you would expect. Maybe I'll do a series of one-shot's about them over the years?

And thank you for telling me what was good and made it good/likable, it really helps my writing!
Your review was awesome, and totally made my day! So thank you very much :D


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