please keep going, it's just getting to the hilarious part! XDAuthor's Response: Thanks im just having a bit of trouble with formatting then it should be up! Report Review
Brilliant! Cant wait for the next chapter :DAuthor's Response: Thanks! the next chapter is currently waiting for validation so it should be up soon! Report Review
Well, this is harlious. but I noticed some grammar issues. And I think if you added more detail it would be even better than it is now.
This was a brilliant idea which could be even more brilliant if done correctly.
I think you should keep on working on it. This was really good.
i would give this a 8/10Author's Response: Thanks so much! I appriciate the critical feedback as much as the praising ones (which are fun!) will prob go through and edit it soon next chapter should also be up soon Report Review
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