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Review #1, by The Claw of Raven Prologue

29th October 2012:
Nice description. I can almost see the scene unfolding. I wish I knew who the girl was ... I guess I have to keep reading.

Formatting is a little weird. Why did you choose to italicize the entire chapter?

And onto chapter two ...

Author's Response: *grins* Thank you very much for reviewing..
This prologue was actually a scene from two years later, so I thought of italicizing everything so it would emphasize the scene.
Oh and you`ll find out who the girl is...soon. ;)



-Failed_and_Forgotten


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