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3 Reviews Found

Review #1, by pinkpanther16 Chapter One

1st December 2012:
I like this story, its really interesting. Update soon!

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Review #2, by Justanotherwitch (logged out) Chapter One

7th November 2012:
Disregard what I said about the description in my first review I ended up deciding its irelevant.

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Review #3, by justanotherwitch Chapter One

7th November 2012:
Hi! I'm pretty sure I'm the first reviewer so yay! The third person was different from the normal first person that you see a lot lately and I like it. It seems like a promising story. I don't like to critique much but maybe think about changing the description of the story a bit? It's good as it is, it might just be me, but from what I've seen on hpff a lot of the most reviewed stories have really, I don't know, intriguing(?) descriptions. I've never actually written a story so I dont know for a fact but just an obsorvation. From what I saw in the chapter you seem to be a good writer so I don't think it would be very hard... Hope you don't take it as your description was bad in any way. Can't wait for the next update! : )

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